Good writing. Minor grammar mistakes, unnoticeable.The flow of the story is smooth.Solid world building so far. Slow yet not too slow.Promising story, and the author is proactive.Try it, maybe this is your cup of tea.
good storybad backward reviewbut i like the move of the book could create please make sure to not let the readers think its 2 book in one book . make it slow and fast but dont do a backward dream befor it make any sens or befor u make it like backward .
Saying on the point that it was a great story ahead! So much for being hurt when you read the title, a dose of happiness is really hard to find!
Honestly, this is not the type of book I would generally be reading (I usually read fantasy plus romance that easy to read). Nonetheless, this book started out really well and has a great description. I can't really say anything about grammar, spelling, typos, and anything related as it was also my great issue. But I think this book is really great for those who liked the genre. Keep writing, author. Good luck ;)
An OOOOOOOOP MCGodlike male that spread hormones and make females want to xxxx himSo far this is semi harem for me, there are lots of girls but mc xxxx them one by one after breaking up with other.Maybe in the future it'll become real harem when MC xxxx them at the same timeBtw it's a short and interesting novel hopes it'll translated fast
Autor aparte de la novela que estás sacando quería saber si también subes capítulo de esta novela comense a verla y me gustó es buena también la historia y tú otra novela también es buena
This book is more than what I expected. I love this book and has already been added to my library. Truly, what a marvellous you have written, Author. It's great. I don't feel like giving spoilers because I recommend you to read it. It's worth your time.
Very nice concept and an idea, however, the author totally wasted the whole thing after the first 20 chapters,*I don't have many issues regarding the strict system because it is supposed to make MC a better academy master, So the strict quest and punishments make sense.*What doesn't make sense is how illogically irresponsible MC is. Believe me it is not a lack of experience, it is just purely stupid. The only reason his students are alive is because of 100% pure luck(or lazy writing in this case).*There are a lot of inconsistencies in the chapters. Example:- How the heck did he forget that the girl he liked is dying because of a curse( Her uncle told that to his face in a previous chapter)?Anyway doesn't worth the time, definitely not worth the money.
A very good and interesting book, I find it intriguing .... I like the MC and how he is eager to get stronger..The plot is great. The author should always proofread the chapters before publishing.. and update stability should be stable. Above all, the book is recommendable.
the most awesome book I ever read. thank you so much.
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