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Before thinking about them though, he needed to remove the scissors from here, she was still fixated on them. If he had not known about Mabel's secret fear, he would have had to spend a lot of time trying to figure out why she was still in this state after he removed the man. He picked up the metal tool, it was still clean meaning it had not been used to hurt her. Satisfied with his finding, he threw it out from the balcony, maybe he'd get lucky and they would plant themselves into the guy he threw out.
Raghnall will surely be busy healing but I hope it won't exhaust all of his power
Well, you know authors only have two default settings for female encounters.Rape or Awkward.
A slap is too light and so is sending her to the depths of hell. She's a walking bomb that won't explode unless you pull her ring. She'll self destruct. Even better ???
Lovely novel. Can’t wait to read more chapters
I think the story is somewhat very not bad
Shang Beize's dialogue is fascinating because he rarely says what he actually means. Take this exchange: Su Yundai begs him to let her go to Tangsheng, and he responds with "Being used as a stepping stone doesn't feel great. You know I'm competing with her for talent. If you choose her, she'll strut around in front of me for quite a while." Translation: I'm jealous and I don't want you to choose someone else over me. But he frames it as professional pride. And then when she offers to treat him to dinner or do anything for him, he says: "Doesn't have to be expensive. No cigarettes or alcohol. It has to come from the heart." And then: "Think carefully. I'll judge by how satisfied I am." This man is playing 4D chess while everyone else is playing checkers. Meanwhile, Wei Lin's dialogue is almost painfully gentle. "Next time, just tell me. I'll never think you're a bother." He's so patient, so careful, and that's exactly the problem. His dialogue is designed to never push, never demand, never risk rejection. But Su Yundai doesn't want safe. She wants someone who will grab her and not let go. The contrast between these two male voices is masterful. Shang Beize speaks in threats wrapped in silk, and Wei Lin speaks in promises that go nowhere. And Lin Yitang—oh, Lin Yitang's dialogue is razor-sharp. "Let's see you steal from me again. So the untouchable North God does have a weakness after all." She says this while patting Su Yundai's back, smiling, while Shang Beize's face goes completely dark. One line and she's declared war.
Reading this novel is like a breath of fresh air. A rare piece of gem in this already saturated cultivation and system novels. So much quality and substance I feel like I'm reading an already published book! The character and story development are so great that I am devouring each chapter like a madman. The world background is very well laid out and there is a sense of anticipation about what is to come in the future chapters. I beg the author to not stop updating! This is truly one of the great pieces of mature novel I have read so far. For all readers out there, this is a genuine and personal review and I recommend you try this novel. Although the initial pace has been slow at the start, it will snowball from there and you won't regret one thing.??#noharem
looking forward to agent Camilla, only suprised because there was no LGBT tag on the book profile...love it already
It is really good book loved it everyone must read it no one should reject it the best book i ever readmust be at top because it is Sherlock Holmes and Watson wuth A C DOYAL
I love the way the main character is described and acts. There is quite some debt in all main characters. The storyline is good and keep your interested in the story, stable two releases a day.
I was just trial reading this story and got hooked. I get why it's a bit slow, wouldn't change a thing tho as I know it will break the flow. There are a bit of grammar error but very few. Quite impressed with the kinda aesthetic story. Be careful to new readers who do not like thriller, this is more leaning towards thriller for the first 80 chaps. Wanted to read more but I'm out of stones. sigh. Oh and can you kindly rephrase or at least reduce the amount of 'When I get out of here, I'm gonna find those bastards..' (not exact words but you get what I mean) part cuz it's more repetitive than I thought. You did great otherwise! Thank you Author.
