Hey, It would mean so much if you could read my short story and give it quick review and let me know what you think. :)I an aspiring writer/author and would really appreciate some feedback, so i could possibly write more stories or novels.
Enjoyed reading it. Hope to get regular updates
The story has a lot of potential and it is gonna go far. I love the MC and the concept of the story. I am really intriuged so far by how the story is going. Good job author
I’m doing this review for the author because he requested help in improving his writing. First, I know that it is hard to give a story a rating based on only a couple of chapters and you are new, but there is much that needs to be done. The grammar of the story is bad. I’m not sure if English is your first language but there is quite a bit of incorrect grammar in your chapters. If English isn’t your first language I give you props as I personally know how hard it is to write in a second language. The punctuation is not done very well. There is much that could be fixed, but the easiest thing is to break up the page with paragraphs. After you finish a thought you start a new paragraph, otherwise it feels like a run on sentence. The story is only 2 chapters long, so at this point I can’t really say much as far as character development or even world background. You did make an attempt at setting the preface of the story, but I feel the grammatical errors made it less than it could have been. I can’t really comment much on update frequency or anything either. The storyline has a similar feel to many of the online novels so I can’t comment yet if you will put your own spin or twist on things and have a truly original feel to it. I believe there is potential but you definitely have a long way to go. I hope this review helps you godtierfreak, and don’t give up. I’ll check on your novel at s later time to see how it has improved.
It's alredy half a year but still no update... Please this is better than the apex system. Can't you continues this one for awhile. Please update this book...... I beg you. ??
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This story is great... Imagine a guy like me who had difficulty understanding in english, dig out the info of the deep words just to continue reading.This story will help you understand that world is not too easy.You think the street is beautiful? Haha, this story shows that its only a view..Have a nice read.
It's obvious from the very first chapter that this author is passionate about what they do. The writing is very imaginative and descriptive. The storyline is captivating and yet it's heartbreaking to follow the journey of the two main characters. It's a beautiful love story and sucked me right in. To the author: Keep up the good work!
Why all five stars?Because I, the great Mod-sama, am in it, of course!No but really, this is all false(true) and is entirely fun fiction(truth). It's just a good laugh! Light-hearted, slice of life about authors. If any of that sounds interesting, give this a read!
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Thanks for the update and for the record I have to go to the office and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates and napkins and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA