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I am giving this an overall 2.6 because your quality of writing needs work, you have so many mistakes in every chapter. Your story development is a 3 out of 5 because the story is decent. The characters are great but still 4 out of 5. and the other 2 i rated 2 out of 5. You might not like hearing this but to make this novel better you need to go back to the beginning and fix all your mistakes. The character level keeps jumping around. He gains levels, but then he somehow loses levels. You are the second most inconsistent author i met. I do like your story though so even with all your faults i am continuing on.
I'm loving, I'm lovingI loved the character, despite having laughed horrors with his name! KsskskskskThe story is so engaging! I get anxious whenever something happens and I'm also anxious that they meet! Hahahaahah
thought it was very good and loved it i prefer this site better than ww because they have way to many ads and this site is more convenient then haveing to go to a new link after each chapter
You know what... the quality of translation is at the level of machine translation... so bad translation isn't seen every day... one would expect more from official translation but I had the same feeling as reading on LNMTL
Attention to detail I like but there is a reason Main characters need to have an ambition that the reader would like to see. People to like to have an overarching idea of where the story is going when reading and the MC for this story has zero ambition which means the reader has no idea what the main goal of this whole story is. Im around chapter 60 now and the Main character just wants to laze around and do nothing but is at the same time super serious about his work as a Judge which would make a cool side character but as a main character the story feels cheapened cuz of lack of ambition leaving the reader confused on the point of this story. i.e. Naruto has the ambition of being the hokage, luffy the ambition of being the pirate king now imagine naruto doesn't have that goal the story is just super lackluster. This can be mitigated like in bleach with certain enemies being the focal point to defeat so life can go back as normal but there is a reason bleach is always considered worse than naruto and one piece for a reason it is cuz ichigo does not have any sort of ambition and that is important for the reader to be invested in. If the main character wanted to become the greatest judge which was a title given in the universe that would mean I have something to look forward to and learn more about the universe thru world building which is well done in this novel. If the main character realized an ambition this novel would have been a much better read but going thru case by case feels like chore to me with no overarching goal in mind rather than something I enjoyed.
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The world and the arcs as of ch83 are descriptive and well built. The story pacing is okay. But my main problem is that the Mc for a genius has a brain that isn't functioning most of the time. This is mostly done to hinder the Mc development and standing and getting some suspense into the story. I have no problem with dumb Mc's, I am quite fond of Luffy(One Piece) after all, but I hate it when an author tries to sell me an idiot as a Genius. And he is seemingly only made an idiot to limit his op ability.
This story is quite literally the guy who copies your homework and changes a few things. It’s a shame because the initial premise was interesting. Look. I have no problem with authors copying good ideas from other authors as long as they can improve on it in a meaningful way, but just read chapter 116/117 of this story and chapter 303/304 of Martial World, and you’ll know what I mean.
This is the novel I need in my life. The story is good not to basic (cliché) and the translator is amazing. It has a little of a slow start but as you go around chapter 40 it gets better and better by the chapter. So I beg you guys to read and support this novel (cough cough because I need a mass release from my favourite translator).
Seriously why is this novel so buries in locks , it might aswell be called the lockness monster. Did something happen at the original release site , i will check afterwards. Btw justdoing this for the exp as dor the rating well my reason is that a crappy amount of content deserves a crappy rating.
Ok guys i love all the novels here and i am so grateful for the authors, but after reading About Qidian intents to take down Wuxiaworld, their attempts to destroy the community of novels i cant support this app and their page, i am so sad, good luck.