IF YOU WANT TO FIND OUT MOUNT TAI ORIGIN
IF YOU WANT TO FIND OUT WHY CAN'T HUMANS ON EARTH CULTIVATE
IF YOU WANT TO FIND OUT ORIGIN OF YELLOW EMPEROR
(WELL HALF IS ACCORDING TO AUTHOR HALF CHINESE MYTHOLOGY STILL....ITS AMAZING)
ITS AN CULTIVATION NOVEL MC IS GOOD NOT MANY CLICHES
WELL 4.6 CAUSE IT WAS ON GRAVITY TALES NOW HERE SO DON'T KNOW THE TRANSLATION QUALITY AND CHP PER WEEK HOPE ITS GOOD
This review is after reading chapter 151 and as I’m writing this I am nowhere close to being caught up. So some of the things I’m talking about could have changed by now.
Alright so the novel overall is pretty good but it has some distinct problems that tend to annoy readers, including me.
The story overall has an interesting premise. The characters are interesting and I don’t really dislike any of them(except for the ones your supposed to dislike of course.) The story does tend to fall into some cliches and some situations that don’t make sense at times. Though it’s not really possible to make a completely unique story and for the most part the hiccups aren’t that bad.
Now the story itself doesn’t have to many problems, but the ones that it does have show up often enough to be a problem.
1) The author’s first language isn’t English and it’s pretty easy to tell. I personally don’t really care to much but I know it’s a turn off for a lot of people so just pointing it out.
2) In the story the Mc is called a genius by multiple characters as well as the author. This isn’t true at all as he’s shown to be average or slightly above average during the story. (and don’t even get me started on his eq.) The characters calling him a genius is fine as those that do are normally biased and it makes sense coming from them. I would also like to say that this isn’t necessarily a bad thing. The mc doesn’t have to be a genius for a good story. There are plenty of good stories with mcs that are just smart, average, and even ones where the mc is a little slow. I personally think it’s more accurate to call him talented as he’s been confirmed confirmed to learn things fast.
3) This is related to my last point kinda but the author tends to make the Mc not realize certain things that are pretty obvious for the sake of the story. For one it kinda breaks immersion and 2 it further makes calling him a genius seem wrong. As I said before, there’s nothing wrong with your Mc not being a genius, but if based on previous experiences they would be able to figure something out either let them figure it out or change it a bit to where it makes sense that they wouldn’t. The worst part about this one is that within like a minute I can normally think of a small change in the situation or dialogue to make it make sense why he wouldn’t know. It makes it feel like the author isn’t putting that much effort in the story when he doesn’t really come off that way.
So overall it’s a really good story premise and I feel like if those problems were fixed the story would be so much better and would probably be a story I’m extremely eager to read instead of just enjoying.
It was pretty decent, up till chapter 40. The translation quality gets significantly worse from chapter 41 onwards.
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Your writing is good but i don't really read about cultivation novels, that's why i found the chapters little slow paced. I only read 4 chapters until now, but i think the story is starting to progress a bit. I would love to keep reading further if i have time. keep up the good work.
Really great book....Exceeded my expections....m expecting more becos am still yet to finish the chapters released......and I love the plot....everything including the characters were perfect....nice novel...
I love this story,I hope mc will have better life
If I have to be sincere, I read this novel till the end thanks to the characters around the MC... his friends, his teacher/master, his lover. As for the MC and the plot development? I felt disappointed and betrayed many times. The novel is well written with even the 'power-level' being well balanced. Sadly, I read and closed the novel for nothing more but curiosity and hope that the author won't mess or kill with the characters I so much loved in the story.
The novel itself starts very slow-paced, but that is rather refreshing. The author knows well how to write the everyday events, training routine, common and funny days, etc.
The first marking event of the novel that makes the MC completely abandon his 'home' in midst of the loss of his loved ones is what annoyed me from the start. How I can say... gave me that, "Oh~how convenient" vibe? That was the first forced part that I felt, and sadly many more appeared.
The MC is TOO slow in maturing. We reach a point of the novel where he despite being aware of the dangers and 'loving' his friend and family, time and time again bought them to danger that could be avoided by chasing in the future when he was stronger (after all, the MC is aware of his own genius).
Strangely, while he always ignores this act of neglecting his loved ones, he always breaks with random people or those that wanted to harm, r*ape or kill his family and friends.
Of course, the character regretting or hesitating to kill a person is normal, but... the author messed so much with the forced events that he felt 'necessary', that the MC becomes something hateful, at the very least, for me.
Concluding, is an amazing and complete story, but with adevelopment and ending that made me hate the novel even while living the characters.
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What happened to the updates
Waiting for updates due to the reason of being addicted in reading this story of Ezra's journey to the peak!