I deeply resonate with the mc; I just want to be rich, I never wanted to be this handsome. But the heavens are unfair! I just wanted to be some rich young master from a rich family! Once I transmigrate into a cultivation world, see how I’ll wipe the floor with your face!
alright I have lots of reason why I rate this story below 3 star but im gonna save another poor soul before they read this story so
1. Author decide to make MC aka Lucifer Stupid & did more stupid stuff in order to expand word count, some problem could easily be solve in few paragraph but nope author decide to make mc did stupid stuff in order to increase the word count like directly hacking SHIELD & get himself interrogate while he could simply use his other identity to solve his problem including lucifer bootlicking Tony stark because he didn't want to build his own connection.
2. Author Strictly would never ever let mc do some drastic action & make sure the story line strictly follow the cannon making this story a self insert rewrite wish fulfillment novel, no idea whether there'll be Harem since I drop this story.
3. Author way too underestimate the infinte stone of MCU.
The story is interesting
Very interesting I must say, it's not easy to write fiction. The author is very creative and imaginative. I look forward to reading more !!!
Alright, so far, this story has been a great read.
The translation quality is great, and I don't really get confused by any strange phrases like you might see in some translations.
Stability of Updates is not really applicable, so I'm keeping it at 5 for the rating's sake.
The story development feels nice and well-paced. The MC discovers new things about himself in a natural manner, and his relationships with the people around him also develop well.
The character design is just... magnifique! Finally, an MC who isn't completely brain-dead! This guy actually thinks about the possible consequences of his actions, has flaws, works to fix said flaws and, most importantly, actually learns from his mistakes! He feels like a real person instead of a caricature!
For the world background, considering this is still only at chapter 60 because of the trial read, I'd say that it's well-developed. Anything relevant to the story gets explored pretty well, while anything unrelated gets a quick explanation before the story moves on. It's not exactly the most detailed and intricate world ever, but it's nice and simple and doesn't detract from the story.
Overall, solid 5/5, hoping this gets picked up!
Whilst this seem to be another trashy fanfic.It is actually a very good one.It has a lot of good laugh and somewhat acceptable power system.Also the genderbender has been mentioned very obscurely so it is not so bad for you so it doesn’t feel to much of a gender bender.
The first chapter I read this I would say that this is good and have a potential to rise like cultivation online I see a lot of novel that has a good and bad story soo even Im look like a kid but I have a great eye for a great things soo dont let me down.
I will give you 5.0 keep it up but take note dont totally copy the vampire system story or you will be sue by there fans.
take this good advise.
I really liked your description and synopsis. The story line is quite attractive. I think you write quite well so keep on writing and update soon
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I really loved the beginning of the story. I have currently added this book to my library, and I hope to be able to finish it! I honestly love it, but I felt like you could have used different pronouns instead of repeating Berry. I do get that's the character's name, and you're trying to state that, but I also felt it was kind of repetitive. I recommend changing those to different pronouns like he, she, him, or her. Whatever Berry identifies as. As far as the book, I can't wait to read more of it. Anyone who reads this comment, this book is well worth your time!