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Characters are one dimensional, the Mc is supposed to have "positive" karma but acts like a normal teenager and doesn't do much for the reader to be invested in him. The world building is poor and relies on established tropes
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Literally marvel hero.. CHINA version.. Guy fortunately got the power of electric eel and rules the ocean. Electric eel ain't that op. They may discharge over 500 volts and potential to kill a human but this creatures is fresh water I believe and ocean are not.. By the way, there are more dangerous and more powerful maritime creature at the sea capable of that ability.. Jellyfish.. MC might even got an ability for tentacles play but he chose electric eel..
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Definitely 5 stars this book is good, the character development and the way he designs the baground ??????????????????????
I read till ch 59 in this novel, I wanted to drop it way earlier than this but because some reviews said it gets better I kept going for a little while, of course it didn't get any better, aside from the grammatical mistakes, incomplete sentences, use of wrong words, the fight and sound descriptions are as bad as it gets, interactions between characters are very illogical sometimes, even the power system itself is not described in enough details.For what it's worth I think the premise is good but the author really needs to work on expressing himself better.
what's with that cover pic? Martial Gamer already use that...............................,..............................................................................................................................................
bread is sweet
it real good can't put it down but I'm ready for Jenna and kieth to be found out be everyone
please update.... it's been too long
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loved it waiting to know what happens next
