Honestly I believe it’ll be great for everyone new to it. Gave myself a review because why not? Lol. Still I hope anyone who stumbles across here will give it a look. You won’t regret it!
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This is such a very interesting read, one that will keep you glued to your screen, you certainly do not want to miss this grip captivating tale. A big thumbs up to the author.
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Nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice .........Good story and I just want to wright a review. LOL
So, I tapped the link of your novel and it sent me to chapter eleven. Is this suppose to happen or is there something wrong with your link? Anyways, the author asked for a character review so I'll definitely do his request.Based on what I've read, the character descriptions are decent but I feel like you could add more instead of writing "unknown man" just like in chapter twelve. Perhaps you could write, "A man wearing a coat of black sees Mandeep waking up from the machinery he is attached to. He catches the attention of the man beside him. The strange man murmurs, My ultimate creation is bla bla bla and things like that" Something like that but still, I'll be rating it five stars. Perhaps instead of (:) You could use (") instead.This is just a suggestion and it's still up to you. :)))Keep up the good work and soon you'll be a great author!
My other review is there because of that one star douche bag but this review is because I think this novel is that good that it deserves a review......
it's a nice story however it's say in the front that the content already update bot why does it stuck at the "chapter170-feeling" ? it's already slow progress now I can't read it beacuse it's stuck
Really good novel. I love the flow. You could also see some of LOTM vibes in parts of the story. The fights are awesome, written really well. I should mention even though you get the vibes you do get other original aspects as well. However, it's a system novel at the end of the day so it will be used as a crutch imo. Otherwise why even have the thing.
I like the plot but the mc, i dont like him at all. He has the intelligence of an ant and doesnt have a centimeter of balls. He forgets to turn on his luck stat and also turn it off. He has an AI guide and he doesnt use her.
The world is a mix of cultivation and fantasy elements.System and cultivation, who doesn't like them, the author has used the System as a good input in the cultivation system.In this world the mc is not the only one with the system, the system does not make anyone op, it just makes all standard.The MC is only a human who took advantage of the early bonuses, becoming a bit stronger than all others.He constantly works hard to become stronger and is not exactly a weak-a*s, as he uses his wits to survive more, different from many MC that rely on Luck and power eruptions to survive, this one at least tries.And the part about the half-slime half-man status of his, it is shown that some de merits have been applied to him instead of just merits.
Im just happy that there is a reverend insanity fanfiction without constant rape or fang yuan and actually whole first volume rip off with different names