Poet_Legion
Loved kept me on my toes
First time reading your story author and thank god I found this one. I love the ending of the story. And I am going read all of your stories..
Oh my I am so in love with this story and am addicted I really wanna know what happens please update me
I am hoping more books from this author. I love teenage romance. this book has a thrill on it and a bit spooky and comedy. love it
Perfect pace, wonderful, catching plot. Excellent book.
Good book!!!
I have read the other books please continue
I have to strongly disagree with the previous review... After all, it’s a novel that has "eroge" right in the title, so if you’re disappointed that the main lead (ML) acts like, you know, an *eroge ML*, then... I’m not sure how to help you. The author clearly establishes the nature of the story early on (the prologue opens with dub-con smut!), so I’m surprised anyone could get past the first few sentences and expect it to be plot-focused. Nothing about the plot or characterizations is really outlandish or "stupid" if you consider the genre of games the author is referencing—both the novel title and synopsis explicitly state that this is an isekai setting where the hero is dropped into a fantasy world that’s literally inside a heterosexual hentai game. So, I’d think most readers would expect the writing to reflect hentai logic and language to some extent. Complaining that the characters are too perverted *when the setting is a hentai game world* seems pretty silly, like ordering a rib-eye steak and complaining that it’s meat when you’re a vegetarian.
I actually find the smut scenes quite enjoyable to read. Even though their first sexual encounter starts with dub-con, there’s a lot of internal dialogue from the main character (MC) about how much he enjoys the experience, which makes it feel less forced and more consensual. It also becomes clear early on that the ML loves Zagan and only Zagan, so I didn’t really see him as a scum stallion... maybe a bit bland and underdeveloped, with his only defining feature being "loves Zagan" (but again, eroge setting, so I wasn’t expecting a deeply complex and nuanced ML).
Surprisingly, I genuinely enjoy the world-building in this novel, with the different attributes and the mystery surrounding the three gods. As the story progresses, the smut scenes slow down a bit, and I find myself more invested in the actual plot (which starts out pretty thin, understandably).
Because of its somewhat relaxed pacing, this novel has become a comfort read for me. I’ll read 2-3 chapters every day or two. It’s not a gripping read that makes you binge and desperately need to know what happens next, but it’s fun as a lighter, fluffier story with some well-done smut.
WARNING: I did NOT give this a 5-star rating. It seems someone is altering the star scores, and it's not the reviewers themselves. If you see a 5-star review, be cautious; it might be misleading. Here's a rephrased version of the previous comment:
I'm puzzled by all the虚假的5-star reviews. This book appears to be a generic copy of other Chinese urban novels. The protagonist constantly meets a new love interest every few chapters, conveniently possessing skills related to charming them due to his past life experiences as a tutor, novelist, singer, musician, and martial artist. Yet, despite being described as a lazy slacker who did nothing but wait for wealth to fall into his lap, he inexplicably excels at everything. It's unrealistic for someone with such a history to suddenly become so proficient.
This story doesn't offer anything groundbreaking; it follows the familiar formula of a Chinese time-travel tale where the hero wins over every girl. As mindless entertainment, it's decent enough, but don't have high expectations.
dont forget diabolos
well just imagine he transmigrated with mount&blade system don’t pay attention to other stuff that way it makes more sense of else you just get more lost if you keep thinking about it.
This commenter is right, ur in for a ride haha.
