look in a mirror xd
Just so we are clear, 10/10 is reserved for absolute masterpieces. Only stories that get the plot, characters and world building perfectly figured out deserve this score.
For instance, LOTM. Does this story have this quality in your opinion?
I like the FL but the my classmate is 200 million years old pops up at like the end of the sentence or paragraph it just ruins my flow other than that I love it.
Ok Bro, let me know later your review regarding the comparison between City of Sin and Demon Hunter if you have tried it
The narrative is engaging, but the translation quality leaves room for improvement. There are frequent name changes and inconsistent pronoun usage throughout the story. Although it improves temporarily for a few chapters, it regresses back to its earlier issues.
The plot itself is intriguing, with well-developed characters, particularly the students from Class 1-0. The protagonist exhibits a high level of omniscience, foreseeing events and having the ability to prevent them, which makes him quite formidable. However, his intelligence seems to falter when dealing with the character Snare.
Taking both aspects into account, I would rate the plot at 4.5 out of 5, while the translation quality earns a more modest 2 out of 5.
Honestly, I'm here solely for the storyline, and I must say the translation is fantastic! ? The romantic dynamics between the main character (MC) and the male lead (ML) are quite unsettling, actually giving me goosebumps, to be honest ?. It's still an engaging story overall, though; I'd recommend giving it a read, but just be prepared for the ML's thoughts. Enjoy! ?
The narrative is decent, with a medieval dark fantasy setting, but the premise feels clichéd. Unfortunately, the story lacks substantial world-building, and the main character doesn't exploit his in-game knowledge or mechanics to a significant extent, despite having a system. The power balance is poorly managed during the first 50 chapters. To be honest, this story serves as a casual read – neither exceptional nor terrible.
Additionally, I'd advise against reading this on Cyborg TL, as it's inconsistent with character names and employs 2000s Western slang, which clashes with the medieval setting. It makes the translation almost unreadable. If the author intended for the characters to speak in such modern vernacular, that's one thing, but it's jarring when applied universally in a medieval context.
I suggest you to browes more about pedophilia.. And love is not just around the same age kiddo, but there's also on different age.. Just try not to see it from sexual side
The story starts off a bit amateurish but it becomes much better after about 20-30 chapters. After that it becomes more and more immersive and it ends on a really great note. Though its a pity that it's a cliffhanger ending when there were so many more things that could have been written about. It feels as though the story was cut off just when the first intense and thrilling situations were about to occur.
Yes.. that's why I'm hook.
To be honest, it was good at the start, even in the middle, but now, it's more of a news report than a story, but I still continue because I have come too far to stop
CH 547: ok wow, this is the first time that Chen Heng legit just admitted to being a world traveller right? before the closest he ever got was when he was taking people from the Curse world to the Gods World while claiming to be another follower of the holy Son.