I Reincarnated as the Villain in an E*oge, But Before I Realized, I Became a Capture Target

I really dislike it. The writing style feels lifeless, as if Zagan is just narrating his own story in a journal, rushing through the plot to get to the explicit content. It’s like when you’re imagining a scenario and your mind keeps skipping to the exciting parts. Additionally, this webtoon handles rape so casually that it's deeply unsettling. In the original story, the main character is depicted as evil and vile for raping his sister, whom he initially didn’t know was related to him. But even after finding out, he locks her up and continues to abuse her. I stopped reading after Chapter 2, Part 1, and I don’t want to continue.

Rating: 3.5

The story was decent for a smut novel, and the two main characters carried the plot most of the time. However, the side characters were rather underwhelming, and it felt like the author neglected their development until the last dozen chapters, where it was all dumped at once. Not only that, but these final chapters were heavily laden with dialogue and lore dumps, seemingly just for world-building purposes. To the point that you could probably skip half of them without affecting the story.

The smut scenes were fine, though.

To be honest, if you didn’t connect with the characters, it’s pretty tough to keep reading through the later chapters, as the basic story progression grinds to a halt. The conclusion isn’t particularly memorable either.

In summary, I can only say that the setting is quite unique and the plot was intriguing at first, while the main character and love interest seemed to do all the heavy lifting.

It hás been already 3 years of wayting

Some people seeing this @ 98 won’t ever know this was rank 11 once upon a time lol story fell off last 200 or so chaps

If this is hard to understand a children book must be as hard as a university level quantum theory book

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Okay, so first off, the smut was good. If I were to rate it, I'd give it an 8.5/10 (I just have pretty high standards).

The plot building was great. It's a typical "transmigrated into a game" plot, but it was well-executed.

The characters were okay, but I got a bit bored halfway through. Did Zagan ever tell Luca his real name? I can’t even remember it anymore, lol.

The story is good, and I’ll definitely continue reading it if I ever have the time.