woooowww..people may say this novel is weak but it's got a whole different vibe..the MC may be dumb and the author tries to write alot of useless things in the chapters to make them big but he drags the story.. the story is a good one
Disgusting. Way too much idiocy and talking nonsense. I mean, after all the build-up for yet another tournament, there's three chapters of talking rubbish before anyone even throws a punch? I get that the author's getting paid more by putting more words up, but this level of fillers is ridiculous. Also somewhere along the way, I got really annoyed with the main character. When I found myself rooting for his enemies to beat the crap out of him, I realized I really shouldn't be reading this any more. I'm out.
Summary: BromanceNot for the fainthearted.Mc had 5 years of fun time foxy...........................................................................
give me the raw link please..,...............,...................................................................................
After reading some other reviews and the author's own words I forced myself to read to chapter 21 before dropping it. The writing/grammar is kinda meh, but the storytelling is pretty good, the first person style of writing is really not my cup of anything and I just find it annoying. The characters are kinda meh so far. The male lead is your typical perverted shounen harem lead. As for how he will find a lifetime love while he is constantly thinking of boning every girl he meets, I have no clue, either way I feel bad for her already.
I wanted to like it, I really did. I love vampires with systems, but alas I didn't feel it. By it I mean that compulsory factor that makes you want to keep reading even when you shouldnt. As for world background and the others if I start speaking I am afraid I will be reported for it sounding like a personal attack. As I said I wanted to like it but it was just lacking in substance, the plot needs to thicken and certain events were very transparent and honestly being able to predict the next chapter and the next chapter more than once makes the story lose it's mystery factor that hooks a reader
what happend to superhunt why did you delete it?
The author is not a true master of increasing word count endless foreshadowing, but this work could be an attempt at a doctorate. He literally repeaters the same thing over and over.
Some stupid fanfiction Not even worth to waste your time withJjjjjjjy5b6b66b6b6b666bb66b6bb6n66nn7n7n77m7mm7m7m8m8m7nunununununun77n
I like it a lot because the Protagonist is so OP!!!??
Everything would be fine if not for the mc's attitude, dude this is a fanfic you should've made him an alpha, It's irritating to see our Idol acting like a beta male.
Why do I feel it's true to life? HahaI like how you giving spices the flow of your novel.Organized and vivid .Continue working on it.Keep it up:C