gotta say, this was a surprise.I didn't expect to enjoy it as much as I did.Great character progression, there's not a lot we've seen of the world yet. Not much world building has been done and not many side characters have been introduced so far, but this has a lot of potential.Give it a read!!
Keren nih ceritanya, jadi penasaran gimana cara Arman menaklukkan musuhnya, Semangat Kak Author. Di tunggu lanjutannya ya kak. ?????????
The world making and character design is very good as the idea of transmigration in novel is preety Common but author done an excellent work in writing as the story seem interesting and promising.
This is the most unique novel I have ever come across. The author nailed it................................................................................ Hahaha. Need to fill 140.
La historia va bien es excelente y original, además va desarrollando trama poco con muy pocos huecos.y por último es constante la salida. Lo único que le faltan son capitulos y ya, todo esta bien para mi.
When update? When update?Good story by the way, so the MC didn't have a hidden background? Or he has?. When update?I just want to say that if you continue this story maybe you can be at the top 50 or 10 ( if you can make this story interesting)
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The way the scenes and actions are described is really detailed as if the events were actually experienced by the author himself and was just retelling it to us readers. It was a cool experience!!!
Nakama world is pretty cool, Colin essentially blows up the word and is betrayed by his sister. Nice. But what I found the best was Adventura was quite Kingdom Buildy and travels through history I also like how the NPCs in Adventura responds.... slightly confused about Shiro as a human and Colin now wolfcat, but hey! you can never have to many wolfcats!
Really interesting concepts and set up.Seems like the story has a few too many ideas that are kinda competing with one another while trying to establish what the plot will be about. I keeps things interesting but also a little unfocused. I feel like the pacing goes a tad too fast at times with too many characters being introduced, too many things happening, and too many rules about how this world works being established one after another.Probably my advice would be trying to espace out the events a bit and focus more on smaller things like character detail. We get things like time travel, aliens, people coming back from the dead, robbery... But I find it hard to get invested cause I feel like I know so little about these people. The dialog also doesn't help. Everyone talks so much but it's mostly exposition explaining what's going on and what they're doing. Dialogs that sometimes go on for gigantic paragraphs. Meanwhile, the actual events like kidnapping a baby only last for a short while. I feel there is a need for people to say less and do more, and allow the reader to learn more from those actions .
author here shamelessly dropping a five star review . But I just want to show off this beautiful art for Freakquency by a very stunning lady , @MichelleLeeee . Drop by her novel "I Love My Angel , Forever Your Demon Queen". It's an out-of-this-world, must read novel!Merry Christmas everyone!!!