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the story setting and character development is off the charts ?, like how you put all characters into perspective.....a well written book...keep up the good work
Already tired of self-inserted edgylords and villains mcs that fills this site?Then give this novel a chance, a novel with a good hearted guy who is just trying to be his best to be good person in a world filled with evil, betrayal and disappointments without giving up, finding his way up in the world, while getting together with some great girls without their perfect cliche.Thanks a lot for this novel author, 10/10.
one of the few books I enjoy fofor the plot and not just because of the reading aspect dialogues are simple writing is easy to understand yet at no point it feels like story is lacking keep reading dawgs author is passionate and loves his book and I love the author for that keep writing bro we might be seeing a goat in the making
I'm waiting for updates and new chapters every day, and I'm also looking forward to the following plots, hoping to speed up the story content.
So far so good, will continue reading, recomend ? dont worry guys no netorare. .
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Pretty good.
Over used story line making the beginning too soft the synopsis ain't attractive either and there hasn't really been any spark what so ever but not gonna lie your writing is good and there hasn't been any plot holes the system also seems chill as such I'll rate this a 4
Author has described the story vry well.
Now where our problem lay was that the worm hole was constantly changing
A girl with delicate face, slender body, perfect balance of upper and lower body features. She had shiny long and smooth blonde hair that reaches her back that tied into lower ponytail with blue ribbon. She has purple ripple eyes and normal eyebrows. The Yin Seal has emerged on the middle of forehead. She wore Sakura Pink Kimono Dress, Sakura Red Skirt and Black High Boots. Her appearance is 18 years old and 170 cm in height.