loving it! Eagerly waiting for the timeskip.
Started this off thinking it was going to be a sweet story, but boy, was I wrong. Firstly, I love the slight contrast between Zarqa and Ali Baba, with Zarqa being raised by her dad while Ali Baba was being raised by his mother, both of them having lost one other parent.Secondly, this book has one of the best transitions I have ever read ok the platform. The dark elements that not only feature fantasy but also touch on the reality of humans makes this feel all the more real.I wanna rant about how well written this piece is and how authentic it feels. This is a unique take on webnovels and I've fallen in love with the book. 10000000/10??
Writing quality is pretty good. The story is set well with good world background, and the charactar is introduced really well. This is a pretty good read and a well needed twist on gates and dungeons, if you will. It finally changes the trope on what they are
[Use this review to survive the first volume. You'll miss the fun if you cry over the decisions. Take your time reading this; there will be some spoilers, but not enough to be a mega spoiler. Volume one was about creating a character for Ellena, basically.]I don't know if my review reflects my current ability or the quality I can produce, but I felt like it had been good since I often check my drafts. Every time I will upload a new chapter, I edit it two times (basically the time I can use to edit these), and if while I read it again, I don't see any spelling errors, or what I can just see. Sometimes, I unintentionally overlook things, so I will apologize again for that.How to survive the first volume? Read all the contents since I don't really do much filler. Filler, in pretext for explaining things over and over again. Maybe I did it, but it was for the purpose of marking it in the minds of the readers.Please tolerate some of the errors. There are errors that make reading awkward. But some phrases will just surface, if for that subject, but not all of the paragraph will be. Note that I am still working, honing my skills, and that will basically take a short time. If I continue on working, perhaps I can reach a majestic way of writing.Some said that my grammar was bad. But to be honest, it wasn't actually that bad for me. I admit that there were some misused and really grammatically incorrect, but for some of those, it wasn't bad. I just wrote some uncommon structuring. I think that it would sound comfortable for others, but not everyonewill like it. I read some compliments about it and some comments that it was bad, but I don't care anymore. I can't correct my past mistakes anyway, so I could just improve them while doing the same action in the future. If I focus on thinking about it, how will I grow?There were some problems with the transitioning... I admit that it would bring some confusion, but I am an avid fan of light novels, and mostly what I read doesn't have any indication that the perspective has changed. They just used marks and, for example, "***
Hey there Author, keep up the good work. The novel is coming great and I know that you can make it even better. So dont lose hope and do your best! ??
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So far it's been very nice, apart from the little thief part ?? I'll keep following it, but please....no MC that takes on human form....since you created a non-human leave him like that please
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Well, it is a good story for an use isekai I suppose but there doesn’t seem to be much of what has been promised. Quite the contrary the MC is cliche in every way of plot armor possible so far. The only thing might be that the MC doesn’t like the role he is pressured into but this is nothing special and has been done before. Another aspect is that the world building seems rather strange to me. You have kingdoms, cultivators and high technology like tablets and phones. This seems very strange and is likely to create contradictions down the line.Well I’ll be not giving up hope just yet to find what the author promised but I doubt I will find it here.
Nice novel yeah !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Funny enough and a true harem.Maaaannnnnn love this sh*t hehehehehehehehehehehehhehehhehhehehehhehehhehehhehehehehhehehehhehehehehehhehehehhehehehehehehehehehehheehehehehehehehehehehehhehhehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe