You deserve a high review, for creating this mashup story into something unique to yourself and writing. Keep on grinding , keep on doing what u enjoy, and gl ><
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Not into video games at all since it is a male lead but the transmigration plot really will drive you in! What if he cannot go back to his real world?
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If you were thinking of reading this, don't. I can't think of anyone that this would be a good read for. But then maybe that is me and if you do enjoy it, I'm glad you have find a good book for you!
This book is supremely well written. For someone who has trouble writing action scenes, your book is much better then many books on this platform. Many things like grammar and spelling are done very well. One thing would be some logic holes, but they are very small, and don't affect the story. I really hope that you are able to continue updating and adding new chapters, as the first 20 are really great.
I need more chaptersAuthor please update quick!!
This novel told an interesting story and unlike some story in the genre. One of the problems were the writing quality. It's pretty bad, with some sentences repeatedly use multiple 'will' or other useless word.
I would say give it a try it's nice to read. I like the novel it's not some cliché "system" or reincarnation novel and the protagonist seems promising. I'm curios about the character development of our protagonist and the people around him. A few flashbacks would be nice to see how he developed over the time before the story really began. To be honest I would ship him with his former childhood friend and his father did nothing wrong. overall 8.5/10
Interesting introduction and well-built world, even the blurb is catchy too, I'm already curious about the cultivators Great work author, I'm rooting for you.??
I wished i could have read this novel. it had a great premise as far as novel junk food is concerned. The translator however did such a horrible job that i had to give up inconsistencies left and right.
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