so far so good since there are only 9 chapters published. The story seems to have potential and ML & FL are interesting enough so far (even I must ask, what's with the ML and sunglasses ? ?) I will keep it in my library to see how the story envelopes.
I'm not a big fan of sports but surprisely I got hooked. Almighty Author keep updating.
This is the only novel where you want the MC to die but you will not hate him. A good concept, MC is a OP, and this novel might end short.Sometimes it feels like slice of life; for people who like slice of life genre will probably like this story.....And don't care about those 1star reviews.....Definitely Worth a try!!
Thank you pancake-chan! You're way too nice for your own good, you should make some money y'know but it's all right! Don't stop writing, if it's an hobby, that's even better!
I am interested in the universe it presents because it is enormous, at least in terms of Veldona's reach, and although I am more into characters with more grounded and not so exaggerated levels of power, I like how variable it is in terms of how it represents them.ps: 1 is an OG, he was ready to leave with his head held high, hope he comes back
Good intresting plot but the protagonist has faced 0 adversity till now no backstabbing no jealousy hate crimes I mean thats one part I like but it completely not being there makes it too smooth sailing for the mc and lack of meaningful interactions except dana further there is close to 0 world building aside from the golden dragon city there is hinted that its a big world but the concept has not been developed also there are multiple filler chapters like trial arc and the rewards that followed it took 20 chapters and then the bus incident again pointless an actual development of foreshadowing of where the story is going because there is no clear antagonist it is just the mc getting stronger and everyone is helping him
The style of writing is simply good, neat and quite good written. First, the premise is good, intriguing synopsis and good first chapter, it could be personal, I think you can find better cover. The interaction between characters is interesting and good written, the description is pretty solid as one could feel the atmosphere in the story. Overall, good read. Good luck.
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starts off a little iffy but quietly sucks you in without noticing .. ..................................................................
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