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Random review/update on my own book lol. Anyways, this is for Vol12 and specifically the story for ch276. I have put a lot of effort for this part of the story and was hoping if you get to read it, leave a comment or review as I really want to know how well it compares to other stories. The reason being is I want to know of ways to make it better or rather what you felt wasn’t good enough.
I'm still in chapter 7 but i think i should leave a review here cause i love this Novel
I give five stars because I like this novel. So far the story development is going well. Starting from the characters, world development, plot, etc. I like it plus the story concept that is rarely found "modern weapons vs fantasy". well.. you know it's hard to find a story like that even if there is it's just an abandoned story. okay enough for the review continue the story max
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Here is my honest review after 30 chapters:Writing Quality: There are grammatical mistakes here and there, but it's acceptable and readable. You won't find the eloquence of a good cultivation novel, but it's still a passing grade. 4 starsStability of Updates: 7/week for now. Hitting the acceptable WN standard, so I gave this section 5 stars.Story Development: The story is carried by the fact that MC changed genders. The pacing is good, but it lacks a lot of details on important parts. MC has almost no struggles, thanks to the super OP system she received. 4 stars. I would have given it less, but I felt it unfair as the standard of cultivation novels here is not much. Character Design: The biggest weak point of this novel. Most of the characters have a personality, but the MC not only doesn't have one solid personality, but the author described her in a way, and she isn't acting like that. Also, the emotions are described but not felt in this novel at all. 3 starsWorld Background: It's more or less explained. You don't get many details on how things look like. The story focuses on development more than details. You get the info you need, though, which will be enough for you as a reader, so I don't complain. 4 stars.My subjective opinion: I started reading this one because the title piqued my interest. The current 35 chapters available were readable but sadly not enough to keep me going. So I'll be honest here. The story has potential, but the author is a beginner. Focusing on the right things, giving details where it's needed, showing feelings instead of explaining them. And avoid absurd situations that wouldn't happen in the story you write. Also, it would help if you learned how to wait for the right timing when you want to write something that you always wanted to implement in your story.Okay, my review turned into blatant schooling, and sorry for this. I hope the review helped the author and the readers alike:)
he she, author joins the story, instead of MC sat down (it is "I sat down")grammar is so bad that i skip most of the nonsenseMC arrives in a world of miniature humans to become their god
the beginning was fine but later it is 99% the same as any cultivation novel ;-;................................................................................................ (Google translator)
Everything so far in the book is cool and character development holds no problems! Overall this book is one of the best and deserves its position in the ranking! The updates are also stable and you barely ever see a stop in 'em. So read this book and it's worth it.
this novel is not worth reading on webnovel as it only begins to tell the story before ripping the rest of the book away as part of an Amazon deal. if it can't even be read why has it been posted? it is kinda sad considering that it looked like a decent story