there wasn't a doubt about me reading this I already love this authors first book " the scar you gave me" which I love and I am pretty sure I am going to love this as well
So far... it starts so well. The MC is aware of the Cultivation World pitfalls and smartly live in such a chaotic world.
Author please update your novel or massive update will work too
THE PACE IS SLOW, IT GOT BORING. PLS DONT DRAG THE STORY.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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The first two are of "lookism "and "true beauty" just jusy perfect and i even shead a single tear at rhe end if "true beauty" but then the idiotic mc becomes is just mind triggering in"ip man"he learned the power of kindness and lazzzyness then it get fucking horrible where he fucking become passive as ****.still gonna read the next are and see if it get bett if not then you know.
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This is a story about a poor delivery boy that got his lucky encounter and become a cultivator in modern society. Unfortunately, even though he gradually becomes rich he keeps going around in shabby clothes driving a 3wheel motorcycle, leading to repeated underestimations and face-slapping. It could be much better, but the author keeps repeating similar encounters and dialogues, thus becoming boring.
Forgive my language but why the **** was this not picked?!!!! I am so pissed
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Have Added To The Library . The novel seems to be fun but I haven't read much , just started , will read after completing some other few but this five start is for the author .
This is to show the Respect for the Author Persistence .
I won't lie it's a little short but give it a try
MADE YOU LOOK
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