Due to me reading scoring ancient body from the get-go I can see a lot of similarities but it doesn't affect me reading the actual story that much. Grammar could be improved since there are some obvious grammatical errors but hopefully, this will improve over time. But there are plenty of good things for example straying away from the cliche of being able to kill without batting an eye also him having a big background rather than being wastewood. the battles are amazing as you can see the development. Can't really comment on romance since I haven't really seen it from what I have read so far. But overall good novel just try and stray away from the same setting as SABFGG and improve grammar and this book will jump in quality.
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There are only 23 chapters out right now, but so far its great. The grammar is much better than the start of the authors other book.......,,
it's a great novel, loved the characters development and the cultural aspect of the book plus it's a unique work of fiction and i think the writer should keep it up.
Each chapter is like one paragraph in the beginning ?u200d♂️. Had multiple deja Vu for every single chapter. It might just be me who has read a lot if novels but the storyline is very( I mean VERY) similar to some novels that I sometimes mistake it as fanfic. Writing quality is a bit bland. Only good thing is faster updates due to short chapters. Hoped to see something creative or unexpected but was disappointed.
he’s a rock and i like roch and apparently he’s a smart rock now so i like him even more and then he became a very big brain rock so 5 stars
Hunting witches? Im in. ( ° 3 ° ).
I like your story though at first i didn't like it based on reviews. it is decent story. though i feel sometimes i feel you are trying to make things too complicated at times. another problem in my opinion is your slow pace and due to which it can't be enjoyed in this webnovel chapter format. Yours is i think something to be read in bulk like after 5 or 10 chapter. Overall i like it. I think it is right balance somewhere between extremes of all wish fullfilment stuff where everyone worships mc and the other extreme where anything and everything goes wrong for mc. Yours characters also feel like people though mostly shitty though that is mostly real life things i guess. Everyone isn't a shounen character. though sometimes it goes too grimdark, i guess. Like everyone has something dark about them them. Also you should gauge your story every now and then between realistic stuff and entertainment for which most people come to read a novel. Too much wish fulment type novel get stale pretty soon but too realistic also have problem of not always being entertaining. Though best of luck.I will follow your writing.
Heyo crazy cronie here,review on 29/03/2021 @chap27 (released chap till date: 27)review divided in: Short reviewLong review IMORatingsConclusionWarning (includes spoilers) short review: Gives you 'Accept disciples and become stronger' and 'History's no one founder' vibes. AND LET ME SAY IT ONCE AGAIN, THE REVIEW IS BASED ON JUST 30 CHAPS!long review: pros: 1) Even though the story isn't original, this is still a fresh read since this ain't the type of plotline WN authors generally pick coz it's a lot more difficult.2) A light hearted novel with almost zero tension. (This can both be a pro or a con depending on readers. To me a pro.)3) MC is smart unlike other novels where the main trait of the mc is idiocy. No plot armour saving MC's ass, mc knows to hide, to run.... Atleast for now that's the casd4) I love the pacing of this novel. Literally the events are not postponed forever and takes place when you need them. 5) Side chara gets the deserved attention. Even though still less than 30 chaps I know the author is giving them the screen time required.6) Author interacts with the readers... Listens to their ideas, opinions and advices and uses them, a big plus compared to those who just take many criticisms and advices comments as malice....7) Maybe because it is new but the updates are stable.. and it is even 10 chaps a week!! Something which I love!!cons:1) [NOT REALLY A CONS] Too much info? Author sometimes give more than info dump required. (I cut my entertainment points coz of that.)2) A light hearted novel with almost zero tension as said above. (This can both be a pro or a con depending on readers. To me a pro since I was searching something like this.)3) [NOT REALLY A CONS] Nothing can be said clearly about world. We don't exactly know where the plot is heading... But then again WE ARE JUST 30 CHAPS IN!!4) MC doesn't have really have any ambition. Like*SPOILER* he just gets a disciple coz the system said so... The system didn't threaten him and neither it was shown that mc wanted to become really strong!!That maybe coz it's just 30 chaps and maybe revealed in the future.5) [NOT REALLY A CONS] Easy to understand writing with little bit of typo errors and some grammatical mistakes which are negligible. IMO:- A little less info dump would be better... - A little ambitious MC would be a big plus for this novel, like creating your own clan/group/organisation... Just a lil bit of hint would be fine ... Even something like wanting to live a carefree life that's why making your disciples strong is also okay As long as my opinions doesn't spoil the plotRATINGS: writing: 8/10 (con-5)update: 9/10 (pro-7)plot: 8/10 (pro-1&2, con-1&3) characters: 8.5/10 (pro-3&5, con-4)pacing: 8.5/10 (pro-4)dialogues: 8/10 (pro-5)entertainment: 8.5/10OVERALL: 4.2/5 Conclusion:This novel has excellent potential! I am just worried like many other WN authors, he doesn't stop updating... I am seriously waiting for more updates:). Thanks for the chapters!If possible pin this review @PurpleSpring bruh!Next review after chap 100WARNING: *SPOILER (not exactly)*- MC till now seems to be neutral. Neither hero, nor villain... Should have been anti hero but even that isn't mentioned...-
Wow. At least it was better than the manga (lol).And it was quite good actually, cuz when u compare some sh*tty work thats so lazy and updates in 1 year and the content is so f*ckin bad that u ask urself ‘is the authors head alright?’ This novel is so much better. I’m currently reading popular light novels cuz i never read light novels, i only read webnovels so i’m new to this and i’m also reading story’s such as ovelord and tensei ****ara slime datta ken, kumo desuka nani ka, death march, konosuba, re:monster, no game no life, tate no yuusha no nariagari, isekai wa smartphone to tomoni (yeah i only read the first fifty chapters and switch to the next one lol).
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