Nice story
Grammar is bad
. With any good book there's some parts you like,love and hate. I read the whole book and for the most part I liked it cause I was like I understood why Keeley didn't want anything to do with Aaron ( but I was secretly routing for him). That being said couple of chapters should be cut out cause I get where Keeley's coming from but it was dragging out. But overall it was good just needs a little tweaking.
The leader of the Fields Sect has finally let me experience laughing while and crying at the same time in chapter 135.
Hahahaha! Li Lou the best medicine.
I am no poet, so I'll just say directly, This is one of our Cultured Read, It's always great when someone makes a harem novel, and not make FLs feel useless, still too early to judge, but I've got good expectations, Keep up the good work.
I have been following your novels from a long time and I am sure that this novel of yours will be great
This novel is truly a masterpiece. The novel is beautifully crafted, the characters are richly developed, and the story unfolds with breathtaking twists and turns. A literary masterpiece that will leave you awestruck and longing for another chapter. A must-read for all book lovers!"
? I believe you will update someday ?? Yeah I believe you will update sooomeday ?? Lalalalalalala La La ?? Blahaaaaaah someday! ?
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Uh. If the world is a bit similar to a game you were playing, someone else probably played that game. And the creator of the game probably feels the similarity too. You would think this kind of information would be out by now.
The author made a great job building everything, hope he doesn't drop it. Normally this kind of novels go to 300 hundred chapters and are dropped.