worth every star I gave glad it wasn't stuck on hiatus. looking forward to more and more. got to stay tuned for sure. hope beyond hope this one is choosen for keeps.
An extremely fun synopsis and premise for a story. Dialogue, grammar, and syntax is excellent. Likeable characters, with a story that immediately hooks you in. Please keep writing.
Nice, this is extraordinarily interesting, lolI don't really know what to sayJust keep it up and try to make the updates frequentYeah least i forget, i just wanna askIs the Main character not too up for a weakling?
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This novel makes me sigh, perhaps the authors style just doesn't work for me, perhaps I know that this will go premium in a month or two, but this novel just wasn't entertaining.
There is nothing terribly wrong with it, sure I am not a fan of all the swearing, it feels contrived. Nor am I a fan of how so many chapters waffle on and feel like fillers. Many of the characters come across as quite copy paste.
This novel has some good points, but the fact that I cannot rave about any of them is itself an indicator of this book.
I advise a rewrite, but I doubt it will happen.
My Wife is a CEO 2.0
I have already read My Wife is a CEO and this is almost exactly the same novel with the exact same archetypes.
Honestly, harems in modern era in novels should be outlawed...
I bought the highest tier of privilege this month. Without updates I am not getting any use out of it. If it the story really gets dropped a refund would be appropriate....
Let us put aside Mad Snail variable from this review. From early chaps I see major drawback from early chapters. In this genre Author need to plant the seed of curiousity a.k.a potential plot development in early chapters because avid reader already read many kind of this novel. But except grinding we don't see much in 40 chaps. I think author just going slow and steady for development.
Other than that, we already got some potential major conflicts, Iron willed MC that have grip on his temper, and our favorite and probably one of most produced genre. Wdyt fellow daoist?
It is difficult to judge from a single chapter, but from the Cultivation Manual and the first chapter rhe novel seems pretty interesting, specially how the technology has been devolved and how the people use older machines to work. It is also nice to read how the culture and the general happenings of the world are indirectly mentioned in the novel.
All the best!!!
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Nice story really.
I love this story as long as you can keep up posting I'll keep on reading. You have done very well. Love how you have built this world and your character development.
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