This is one is gooooood......................................................................................................................................
i want you to keep writing it. its a freaking masterpiece. when i heard it got axed i felt really sad so can you please continue writing it.
Bruh all that for fried Chicken I approve and hopIng for a 2nd Book!!!!!!!!'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!??????????????????????????
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The story is soooo amazing and the actions are heart warming but please if u can at least update the always for us. Please am dieing to see the end of the story
This is me reading when this book. ? So riveting! I really can’t say enough about this heart-stirring story and amazing translation. Grateful to have stumbled across this to heal my broken heart over the drama’s bungling toward the end of the series.
I just read through all of the chapters available for this novel, up to 247, and I must say that I have been thoroughly enjoying this novel.I didn't have a lot of expectations going in but the quality of the work and the depth that each character and situation had to them truly kept me on the edge of my seat the entire time, making me want to keep reading.It is a very complex story with a lot of elements that I know some people might not particularly enjoy or may be off putting to them, but getting past the hiccups in the beginning and understanding a bit more about the situation that isn't very apparent on the surface level has been a truly rewarding experience, and I recommend you if you have just wandered by this to give the novel a chance.Some parts of the story I didn't particularly care for (for example, *perhaps a bit spoiler, just scroll all the way down. I didn't mark the review as spoiler because the larger portion of this review doesn't have any, and this is just for providing some criticism for the Author*............The introduction of the third world didn't really hook me in to much, and I ended up skipping to the end of the larger arc that happened because I wasn't as invested into it like I was with his original world and the second world he found himself in. It seemed particularly random at first, and the events didn't seem to have much of an important place in the story [though, I may just be ignorant as I hadn't read through it too much. I will say, I've been able to keep up with the story for the most part without getting any context from this part of the story]. Author, one criticism I'd have when you go about this again is to try and give a more solid connection to the new world and the character and his reasons for going there to create more investment for the reader. It seemed forced and out of place the way that it happened.).*END of spoilers*..............Truly a hidden gem, it's a shame that it is so underrated as I am writing this review, and I can only offer words of praise to the author for giving so much effort into your novel here. Please keep going, I'm excited to see what happens next with the story.
It's trash.238233383823238490239408258947234757329484312837329481354829363729367282348291342842342193342813238174
Another shameless review form me, the author. Idk if this actually helps with reach, but I hope it does. I won't actually be reviewing my own story since it would be most likely biased. Hope you have fun time reading this story! <3
I can write another one ohohoho EXEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXP
Legit , best story , I've read so far ,...................,............................................... . .... ..................
I like everything. I don't care about the grammar because I read worse (Chinese fanfic and translated through Google translate) and so all well interesting idea and yes I also do not know English well. But the piece itself is good