Good story, Good flow and character development, Good English
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this isint an original novel and it costs gems to read despite using other games and entertainment this is not an original and theyre making money out of it i want them to copyright this so bad, The idea is also similar to "only i know the plot"
I gave such a low score because suddenly am tossed into dbz Universe and since i read some n watch some dbd so i understood a lik bit of this but otherwise Fresh people who havent wAtched or Read any dbz have no clue Who is who because their was no world building and i dont even know who the mc is oR his story because their was no character build. The fight scene also was written cheaply got to aDd some more into it but its underStanable since your knew nice try
Pingan was still in fear being paranoid of getting killed for no reason by the “experts” of this world. When The people of this world saw pingan’s cultivation they were wondering if their cultivation was fake
The story seems like it was written by a teenager.
The direction, flow everything is cliche and cringe as fk.
So many predictable things in this story that I feel like the author is inexperienced in plot making.
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Another work. I believe this novel packs terrifying potential. I'll just be hoping for something, which actually is that: more chapters, please!
Also, with respect to all other works as well as this one, thanks so much for making my day as always!
I’ve read to chapter 14 and I’ m bored already. I might try to read it later and see if it gets better but i doubt it. 0/5 would not recommend
This ongoing WebNovel is quickly becoming one of my favorites. The author's world-building is so intricate and the characters are so complex that I'm constantly fascinated by their stories. The plot twists and turns are so unexpected that I never know what's going to happen next. I highly recommend this WebNovel to anyone who loves a good ongoing read!
All five for now as its just getting started.based on the twenty chapters, I can see hints of astral petstore, and other beast taming genre novels.