Redoing the review as of chapter 13!For some reason of didnt update the chapter I have ready.Anyhow: Well written and detailled story! Has some infodumps but the info does matter, so I'm kind of Oke with it for now. I want some romance *since it is tagged*. I really love the interaction so far! There are quite a bit of monologues though..Its better written than alot that I've seen! Looking forward to the rest
I am a HUGE fan of books that have an element of crime or suspense, and I honestly think you nailed it. And that writing style???? Gosh, you're doing amazing. Keep it up.
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Hey guys, Author here. I just wanted to leave a few words regarding this story of mine:First and foremost, the book is inspired by The Beginning After the End by Turtleme. This beginning of this story mirrors TBATE, and if you've read the work, then you'll immediately recognize the plots and situations. Both stories obviously diverge later on, but you can expect the first few dozen chapters to be extremely similar.I'm also trying to improve my writing with this book. I'd say I did a decent job at checking for mistakes, but if you happen to find any, or just happen to read a sentence that doesn't sound right, just let me know. I always try and correct mistakes I missed.Pacing is also something I struggle with, so any tips on how to go about adjusting and setting the speed of events would be much appreciated.Here are also some questions I've gotten:Is this story a harem?- No. Is there R-18 content?- No.Is the story perfect?- Fuck no.Obviously, the last one isn't a question I've gotten, but please don't start reading this story expecting some modern masterpiece. I'm just a simple author who's trying to write their very first novel.That's all I've got for now. I really do hope you enjoy my story if you decide to try it out. If you have any questions, just ask away or ask me on discord. (Link will be in the synopsis of the story)Thanks for everything :)
the first chapters typo error sometimes hard to understand but qhile your immerse in the story you will get used to it and can ignore those small matters love this novel but in my situation cant buy coins
Hey I Love the story but the stability of updates is gone. ??. I want to give it a perfect rate but it isn't so can please write more chapter for us. ??
It's a nice and laidback story with a decent pace, as most other slice of life type story usually gets stuck and start to feel repetitive after about 50+ chapters into the story. But simply put this one doesn't feel asrepetitive like most others.
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This is really enjoyable its like discovery channel snake with a system....................................................keep em coming.
I'm not sure why this story isn't more highly rated, unless the LGBT theme has created a bias for readers. If that is the case, there are people missing out on a really well written story.The characters are engaging and have their own personalities, the plot makes sense, and there are enough mysteries remaining to keep you interested.Give it a try.
The switch between Enola and Sandra definitely made them realise what they previously had compare to what they got themself into now, as the author said in her book titled "I will make up for my mistakes" that "we all agree to the fact that we truly understand the value of a person when we lost them and all we want is a second chance to makeup for our mistakes." loved the story, plot and the characters! Brilliant job done as always by the author!
not a good novel in regards with the available sect development novels.prone lose interest early.The game of the world tree is 10000 times better than this.