Uhhhhh probably better than what ever god forsaken thing twilight was
I've never read a novel here that goes into the depth of designing realistic backgrounds like this story. Really.The amount of effort that goes into making a story with actual explanations on is really difficult. I'll commend the author for their work. Writing is not easy in the slightest. Genuinely, the best part about the book is that it feels realistic for a fantasy world. I've read other novels that just throw in fancy magic stuff and random characters that just follow the MC around. Those are shallow. But Haku and his crew- you can actually relate.Although I haven't caught up completely yet, I came to do a review because this book needs more reviews for how good it is. The writing quality is fantastic, and the author put a ton of effort into cranking out this story. I'm grateful. Sometimes the story can stagnate for a bit, but there isn't another reason I think of that would make me think anything less of the story.For anybody who wants to try reading this book, I highly recommend it.Kudos!
That's an interesting beginning if I ignore the typos. I hope that you will keep up the good work. I am sure that this novel is worth everyone's time.⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐All the best!!
Not bad, it is even Good really. Some cliche but fairly well used. Different take on the whole monsters always obey the Demons thing that is always in these types of stories. Though it does have a System it is different from others in how it works. Give it a chance.
Started reading this, haven't gotten that far, about 20 chapters in now, but have given up due to the grammar. There were just too many cases of wrong pronouns, mixed tenses and then weird cases of stating something with the name of the item used, e.g. The masters sword, with the author then right afterwards asking what it was, even though the MC has been using swords his whole life.
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A nice novel it is.Thats all I can say, I will give 5 stars idk why.Oh btw all reviews shouldnt be less than friggin 140 characters what the heck I dont want to write long reviews on the world background/character design because I think I couldnt write better than the authors.
Excellent Novel. Keep it up.
I like your story, especially the way uou described the scenes. I feel like I was watching a movie. You are a skilled author. Way to go ???
The story gives you a very homie and warm vibe with everyone supporting each other recommended novel if you like books of friendship. Keep up the good work???
Keep it Up Its really good ngl hehehehehe
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?