I don't know how this trash has such good reviews for 5 stars: but it's trash basically martial world, different beginning and yes a system that after some chapters it's no longer used... yea so dont be a full, from chapter 1- till-130 it's original but after just copy paste after martial world,so judge yourself as this is another copycat of martial wolf
If you've read Battle Through The Heavens and want a similar experience, then Martial Universe is for you. Starting from an insignificant clan, coming across a treasure with a spirit inside who helps the MC quickly increase his cultivation, competition arc every corner, progressing from one small town to a greater region and finally at the peak of the world.Although there ARE just as many cultivation levels as BTTH, it's not as broken. The first 3/5th of the story may feel repetitive; cultivating, competition arc, treasure hunting with some plot development in between. However, the real fun starts after that. The events prior may as well be considered as a foundation for MC's character and cultivation. The latter part of the story is what's great about this novel. Much action, heart wrenching feels, and true anticipation for what's going to happen is what makes the latter part different. Another part that I personally liked was that most characters (not just MC and his group), whether from the beginning or from the middle of the story, has actual roles in the latter part of the story. If kinda feels nice when everything connects at the end. Also, there's a small cameo of Xiao Yan from BTTH at the very end of the story. (Irrelevant Spoiler: Both MCs travel to the same universe at the end.)
I had a good time with this one. Recommended.The only complaint I have is grammar. There are a lot of mistakes that need serious editing.
The only reason I'm writing this review is because the author stated that this novel is gonna be the most memorable novel I'll ever read, which I would partially agree if I was able to read pass chapter 14.But there is one memorable thing about this novel, and it's the amount of bots, so far I counted 8. My Review: Writing Quality (5/10), Story Development (5/10), Character Design (2/10), World Background (3/10), Cringe (8/10), Edgy (8/10)Likable Mc: XLikable side Characters: NoneGrammer Level: Middle School ( No hard feelings dude, I'm not hating )
Ok, thought this would be decent, but nope. Nothing. Cold garbage. There arent enough details, i dont get a picture of anything, and MC knows information we weren’t even told about at all. Sure, someone explains something vaguely to the MC, but we know absolutely nothing about what was explained. You would think that we ahould know something right?
This was a slightly different type of pet story that i havent found in other books. Really hope it gets picked as the next book, I want more!!!!
Legge has achieved high level in the dao of translations !!!!Its almost impossible to translate a chinnese literary art in other languange, and still sound so beautyfull...Thank you legge, for your time and loyalty to iras....
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Spoilers Through Chapter 219I will start this review by saying most people who like these kinds of stories will love this book. It has a well written romance aspect which I found suprising. It has some great world building: not the best I have seen, but very good.Here are the things I found hard to ignore.I think the side characters and villains need more developement in terms of their backstory and motivation. Most characters besides the main ones don’t have any drive from what I can tell (as in, they have no goals), which makes their characters seem very two dimensional. Martha, Luke, etc. all serve a purpose, but we don’t really know anything about the characters themselves: their hopes and dreams, what they want to do through talks with the main character. The author will have moments telling us that Martha and Khan talk about personal things, but I want the author to show us these personal things they talk about. I believe it would enhance the story even further. Despite this, however, the usage of side characters throughout the story I think makes up for the lack of side character and villain motivation. I will say though, that if the author were to include more interesting backstory than just, (spoiler) for example, Illman’s main purpose when he gets introduced is as Khans romantic rival for Liiza, then I would be more excited to read more and more.My biggest gripe with this novel, however, is the author’s constant use of the phrase “the latter”. Instead of using the person’s name or some other descriptor, the author over uses this phrase and it makes it very hard for me to keep reading, especially when it is used upwards of 5 times a chapter. It seems most prevalent in the chapters containing fights. It makes the writing seem repetitive and boring, and it always brings me out of the scene instead of enhancing it. It needs to be used much, much less.Another problem I have is with the romance. I think the developement of the romance between Khan and Liiza was great and it fealt organic, but there were many aspects I found unrealistic. Why would no one question or try to follow Khan when he would leave to be with Liiza? Wouldn’t Kelly be concerned and try to follow him? I find it unrealistic that Khan and Liiza could get away with a relationship for that long without anyone becoming suspicious enough to at least try and follow him. And sure, you might say there was Illman, but I don’t think anyone would see him as much more than a slight bump rather than actual romantic contest. I like that Illman came to his senses, but I think it should have been drawb out longer to threaten the relathionship with Liiza more. It would add wayyy more tension, and add to the story too. There were a lot of small things like this that I feel the author didn’t capitalize enough on because they wanted Liiza and Khan to end up together without any resistance, but it meant there wasn’t any tension at all, so it left me disappointed.Overall, I think this author is very good, but they definitely have a lot they could improve on that would take their story to another level.
What a whaste !!! How many floors should a bag of rice have, how many floors should a bag of rice have, how much should you pay for a bag of rice, how much should you wash a bag of rice, each grain is muddy, to whom you gave a bag of rice!Spicy Tiansai! ! !Jiraiya swimming in the sea of dragons and angelica, popsicles melting under the street lamp
I really liked the first 800 chapters but now the author is just trying to meet the word count and writing a lot of unnecessary stuff which honestly doesn't help the story much. Well without all that it's a pretty decent story for passing time
OMG IT HAPPENED! FINALLY!! I'M SO HAPPY!!!