The story has a great idea (the reason WotMW effective stole it) but the author is terrible.1. Dialogue between characters is terrible, feels like what a 5 year old would say.2. Author is inconstant with anything.Time to get somewhere? ChangesAge of MC? Changes3. The fights (chapter 84-88) horrible, the fight made no sense and was horribly written.4. Zero logic and intelligence. Characters don’t act right at all.4.1. The spells the MC chose were useless in the fight, yet he still manages a draw against a fully trained stage 3 apprentice... like how? The stun spell did nothing just filled space and the hand spell needs direct contact to work.... who is going to slap, with their hand, their opponent in a fight?5. Pacing. The author has no idea how to properly pace the story, we spent like 10? 5? Chapters on the MAGIC SCHOOL. One of the most import parts of the story was massively rushed.6. Poor translation/editing. The story has many grammatical errors in it, those may be accurate translations or the editor couldn’t be asked. This is bearable but along side poor dialogue and no logic the story’s got too painful to continue reading.Don’t bother with this, just read WotMW and be done with this plot.
interesting enough..... but a bit slow ...
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It’s a great story and I really enjoyed it. However, I think it should be a bit fast paced in my opinion as if it goes on slowly explaining the world he is currently in like the rest of the novels, it would remove the whole point of him reincarnating in different world after he dies. Moreover, I feel like the author should drop a hint or two in the worlds he’s gonna reincarnate about why him and his friends are going through this reincarnation thing like what’s the whole point other than them becoming stronger, also I feel that a great antogonist should be introduction that’s against them reincarnating.
I’m the author so I’m obviously gonna give myself a good review ?This book is really nice fr, you guys should stick around for the journey
This is a good story with a good plot mc level progress is a little bit fast but that's understandable since he is op in this world so far everything is good I enjoy reading this story.
Good day Author! im done reading your masterpiece and i must say that this story deserves so much recognition as it has a good plot, character, events, and content. I am not fond of this kind of story but after i read yours i got curios and wanted to have more. I will add this on my collection so i can see how interesting this story will get. Continue on writing!
It's simply an all round five because even as an Indian Hindu, I find the tale more interesting and a nice masterpiece. I'll encourage everyone out there to read this, it's good stuff
Awesome romance .... not less udivitelny method to become a writer and type a lot of words ...an unexpected move, it is significant. But it is possible that the author had such a cunning idea, so that later, to write something more intriguing.It only remains to wait!
I hope you won't finish the murder arc too quickly. Is this going to be a long series or a small one? Are you going to include other cases with the main villain being the murderer? It seems like an interesting story. Thanks for the efforts.
I love the novel, I could feel my heart beating especially in the fight between Tyusuki and Palkeros. It was fun to read, It's a good novel.
A definite must read. I wish I could but this book as a hardcover book.