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just when things started goin better novel was dropped and announced to have a physical novel year later still no news I don't know if author died or disappeared mysteriously from earth
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It's a fun to read story , the MC has a whole world at his back or inside him. He can use whole resources of this suppose world. as its his previous life game Empire it's a bit of an OP cheat and many things dont make sense as in its to good to be true cheat to have . As far as i have read (60ch) he doesn't need to compete or level up to gain any resources which one of the things i look forward to in a novel but he already at the top in this game Empire free to use and research, and the only obstical is that this game world changes from a mana based to a soul power based and the people of the game world are researching this new power. So its definitely a fun read i would like to read in my free time and hope its selected in this trial period.
Very interesting story with some unique ascpects that I haven’t seen in other novels with systems. Steady release too, only complaint is chapters are slightly on the shorter side compared to translated novels. Overall, highly recommend as it has an interesting build
Im a new writer i hope as the story develops so will my writing skills and overall provide a better story in the long run please bear with me as i do updateds and please critisize at tell me where i left gaps after all its time for a beast cultivator to arise
Mc is a spy, but acts recklessly and doesn't listen to system, made specifically to help him infiltrate hell...m'kay now author doing drugs is bad m'kay?but seriously though, apparently demons have conquered 99% of the universe and 50% of hell so the heavens decided " M8 we know they conquered a lotta land so we decided that you know it's better if we wait until only 51% of everything is free before we do anything because that's reasonable" anyways, the Mc is a 'spy' I'm assuming he's a pretty competent one since he's the one chosen to infiltrate hell, but then again he could just be sent there so that he'd get out of their hair.The writing is bland, the characters are bland, if you wanna read a story about angels Vs demons read the bible, though be warned the main character of that story is OP and a total douche sometimes.anyways Mr.'Author' instead of releasing 3 chapters a day, maybe you should spend more time on your 'research' and polishing which, not to be rude, but i doubt you do much of.
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Don't let this book disappear. Hope for more chapters. 140 charachters, 140 charachters, 140 charachters, 140 charachters, 140 charachters, 140 charachters.
Story has a good premise, but the writing needs some work.The transition (at least for the first good bit) is very rough, at times contradicting itself, or not making sense.The pacing is wildly inconsistent as well, which makes following along a bit difficult.Lots of unnecessary repetition and/or rewording of information, sometimes for entire chapters.Main character is supposed to be very smart, but does some really stupid things, such as throwing away all his advantages (stealth, range, first attack) to rule-of-cool the boss instead.If you can read though this (and ignore some bizarre world building choices) it looks like it could be fun.
This book is quite an interesting one. Although it doesn’t have much of the “promised” assassinations as I wished for, it has a quite good lead and story. A novel with a story that includes things of family and relationship development. It’s a well laid back novel although there are some quirks I have with this novel. These quirks are how the MC is just overall too underpowered - his wife was just some random homeless girl he fancies basically but she got stronger than him..., the kid that his wife had previously also is stronger and beat him in a match because of techniques (but realistically this shouldn’t happen... the difference in power is immense... basically like saying a highly skilled child in martial arts is able to beat a trained soldier who doesn’t have formal training of the arts), the amount of depressing chapters of rap* and people taken advantage even though it kinda doesn’t do anything for the story. I’d have to rate this out of the novels I’ve read a read but be sure you are able to hold in the pain for some scenes depicted. (THIS REVIEW IS MY OPINION and although it may be a little indifferent to others deal with it)TLDR: Read but hold in pain and clench for some scenes. The family moments are enjoyable to read though. Also don’t expect too much assassinations.