Celestial Goddess, Luna's punishment for the wicked creatures of the dark!
The blue energy around me swirls, gathering inside the solution. The solution glows in a gentle blue, and at the base of the vat, still inside the liquid, as the light fades, a blue, luminescent crystal formation grows rapidly, growing as if in fast forward until it reaches a considerable size, enough for two basketballs, I think, even though they are formed like quartz crystals.
Great story so far, which is pretty rare on this site. I would highly recommend this novel if the genre intrigues you. Not sure what else to say but there is a 140 character limit ???
"This guy was supposed to kill me?"
"Ying! How come you're early today?" He tried his best to wipe all of his sweat, but he thought that it wasn't enough, "Uh… hey? I'll just go and change my clothes for a moment. Please stay."
Cold and calm, she opened her mouth to speak, but he already knew what she wanted to ask.
While the translation team itself is doing great, the story itself has issues. Seems very jerky, no smooth transition from chapter to chapter there is always some sort of short time skip so that the author doesn't have to explain something. While the character was raised on a dangerous planet, he had a father figure for a time and spent time with others in VR but he acts crazed and dangerous when he meets people in real life.It is cool that everyone has a mech but it is never explained why those who aren't in the military nees them.Finally no actual story line the character jumps from plot to plot without completing anything
I really like reading these kind of stories. If anyone knows any other stories I hope you would tell me. I don't know how to describe this story but it's amazing .. ❤❤❤
keep it up and I'll keep coming back for more
Brilliant, just brilliant.The story is pure gold.First, the MC is said to have blurry memories of his past life and is not transmigrated so he doesn't have an earthling personality and it's good. Maybe that detail will be important later but so far it only explains his better divine sense than other. I actually forget about it.And because he is not from Earth, his personality is really good. He is crafty, he is bold and he knows to use his head. I really love the MC.He is not perfect, he has weak spiritual roots and a weak body. And he won't miraculously change that. They will be a problem all story long but he focus on his strength (array formation and strong divine sense) to advance and forge a unique path. He is never overpowered compared to other at the same level even if it can be felt sometimes because he knows to use his strong point to win.The thing I really like is all the other characters. They aren't flat with 2d personality. They have depth, they are useful and they aren't discarded like trash when MC is too powerful. Their relationship with each other and the MC made me almost shed a tear at times.And for the story? It starts slow to introduce the characters and the environment but it really picks up fast. You feel quickly there is a huge plot around because the MC is concerned on a local level but the more you learn, the better it becomes.Don't expect quick cultivation level up even if you can feel the MC getting better. The story isn't about his cultivation, it's a real story focused on a plot.The only problem is the MC's gender change with the translation but it's not that annoying because the story is just too good.
good hook and interesting enough plot to keep you wanting for more. biggest gripe i have with the novel is the characters. the way they speak is unnatural, written like an ai wrote their dialogue, even their internal monologue sounds stiff and unnatural. another thing is their intelligence, the side characters feel like their a level dumber than the mc and they dont really act their age, things just happen and they just accept it. no questions asked.
Its really great, I would advice everyone to give this novel a try!@Author: If you drop this… Im gonna cry ?