Welcome, potential readers. I just want to explain a few things about this novel you've clicked on. First of all, the story progresses really quickly after a couple of chapters, and it gets wild after that . Secondly, our mc may tick you off at first, but if you've read the prologue, you'll see how amazing he ends up becoming. He doesn't start out being overpowered from the get-go. His Gift seems useless, and to be honest, it is his application of this power that makes him seriously powerful. Another thing to note is that there will be a lot of touchy scenes depicted here. As someone who had been wronged by everyone, with no moral compass, Jeremy makes a lot of decisions that seem selfish and questionable. In a world such as this, it's very understandable. Finally, concerning the plot and storyline, character developments, progression and the likes, I can't speak for everyone, but it's top-tier. You can read and see for yourself This definitely won't be a novel you regret reading.WARNING: Mc starts off as a little edgy and his attitude may upset you. However, just be patient. He grows, and eventually... You'll all love him! If any of his thoughts and personality initially don't sit right with you just endure it, and make sure to voice your opinions. It's understandable for anyone who has gone through what he has that they will have an imperfect side, that's one of the beauty of this novel, realism. But, like the title of this book states... It is the 'RISE' of our dear MC. Let's all give honest reviews and comments as we read. Your feedback is really important to this author and the story's development.
the mc makes me very ANGRY, she din't want killing people just because they are humans. i Realy want to hit for her stupidity. she thinks so simply than make me sick and the developpement of the history is just so slow.
The writing skill is impressive, how the author explains the fight scenes is admirable for as the reader you can see the image depicted by the author. And I love the whole fight arena sequel it reminds me of "The hunger games". It's a unique book to read and there are few books like this one that draws the reader into the Authors world. Keep on writing, loving it so far.
Due to my lack of experience with the Cultivation genre beyond that one Worm fanfic I read months ago, I really have no right to criticize about the mary sue-ish nature of the characters. Σ(´∀｀；). What I can say however is that the grammar could use some work. Some sentences feel incomplete, missing a word here and there. There's also some inconsistencies with the tenses being used in the same paragraph. The world is fairly detailed, and I can see the story going far with a bit more polish. Keep on keeping on ?
Great Novel Overall.Kinda a bit rushed but still ended satisfying.I am just kinda sad like the old characther such as Elizabeth R-18 had never been mentioned again after chapter 150ish.So its just kinda skipped(MC dualcultivate with his wife for days:like this).Thank you author for the journey.Oh and check out author patreon to support him.
Droped???
Uninteresting. MC leaves his job to follow his system that just woke up.MC starts by climbing a mountain and selling magic rice for a high price, ok.MC is pretty plain, and the system just outright bullies him. OK.I mean seriously, I've seen around 5 other novels with the same premise, isekai->system->build up their shop/sect/force of their own.So far they're all the same. If someone has read further please let me know if something unique happens, I didn't bother paying fast-passes for this.
This week's trial reads are super strange... forging the path, your talent is mine, and super beast tamer all only have 61 chapters in the raw ... with basically no one in china reading them. All of them haven't been updated since 2020-12-03 as well. Strangehttps://book.qidian.com/info/1024631207 -> forging
So is he like an alien from the outside because he can transform or is it because of the system that allows that so he can became/ transform into a giant
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I think this story has potential, the plot is pleasant not so fast or slow, especially the alternative world if it takes advantage of it well it will develop very well, well I hope and do not drop the novel, thanks to the author.Sorry for the spelling mistakes, English is not my first language.
There's a dropped section, don't put your novel as COMPLETED if it isn't complete. What, are you that hungry for views?It's not even a hiatus :/