the author done a very good job with football details and stuff. but, he seems to forget that the mc is actually a person but not Robot. common man, his girlfriend has Miscarriage but mc seems not even remember about it the next day, and he goes to play game. the guy got second life after dying alone, but only thinks about football and nothing else, I mean I know it a sport novel, but common, at least let him live some good moments of life other than training and stuff. overall it's Hard for me to pick after authors recent hitus, author should improve on charectar designing and building, because there is no way a person who died and came back to life will behave like the mc you're currently writing.
