The book is amazing!!! I fell in love with each character, their attitudes and their kawaiiness(pretty sure that's not a word, but meh). The 18+ scenes were especially great. As a yaoi lover, I give the story a full five. Only regret is, author-sama hasn't updated it!! Please update soon author-sama! I love it!! ♥ ♥ ♥
I see potential in this just do some more chaps and quick updates u will see this in top 50 in 30 chapters.Keep it up............................................
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An interesting plot furthered by good writing. Although system fantasy stories have become an increasingly common staple, hopefully the author will be able to distance this story from others.
So after reading 40+ chapters. (Idk how I came this far but I am going to discontinue now, still here's a review of what I found)First of all this is your typical trash chinese novel ok but readable... Grammar and quality is alright, could even say better than average but again full of cliche' like trash child, having a fiance who wanna most likely break the proposal? not confirmed yet, gate guard whose mysterious and more powerful than the clan leader, mysterious dragon pet egg and lastly most cliche that mc isn't the real son of the family and his father was a big shot at a time and now the mc has big shot emimes because of that. So basically, this novel has every fricking cliche you can think of.Most irritating thing is MC's personality...he complaints every 2 dialogues, nah more like whenever he breathes. He's arrogant, foolish, brainless with no what so ever power or knowledge to justify his arrogance or foolishness. So, if you like being irritated or like this type of MC...go for it.Action scenes sucks very much I had to say and for a cultivation novel, its a big put off for me. Pacing is slow too like you can see even after what 40+ chapters...we haven't even seen MC's so called fiance.Characters are very dull, like his supposingly adopted father doesn't shows any affection for thr MC...only yelling and scolding even after he comes out on top of his family's other youngsters. only his mother loves him in his family probably and she isn't even his real mother idk yet (but main put off is that even after so much humiliation and struggle from his peers in his family, MC thinks of paying off the family by bring strong).I think that was all so my final thoughts? try first 5-8 chapters and this novel continues the same vibe so don't think mc will get better or story will progress, if you like that 5-8 chapters then this novel is for you, ty. peace ☮️✌️
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Definitely one the best novel I've read. Thank you author!.................................................................................
Since it has potential and you asked for a feedback, I'll leave a good rating. This might change in the future depending on what happens in the story later
How can I say.. The story just became my fav with all the villainous things but suddenly the author made a twist and added something which I do not prefer and don't have confidence about the future of the plot anymore..The story is great with everything needed to be a villain, but the mc (author) suddenly had a thought to change it with a fetish of few men but seriously not mine.. that's what broke my heart, I'll still continue to read and wish that the plot goes in the right track again.
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