A spectacular novel that forces the MC to use his brain to survive through incredible plans, in addition to very good narration and story progression, in addition to very good Mc and secondary characters. Simply incredible, five stars.
If i could give this 0 stars i would do that, but i cant.. basicly the mc is an asshole.. barely have the story started and he tells a partient, some bad things, cant totally remember what he said.. but think it was something like he is inhuman, and that he should just die or something like that.. and said that because the partient dosent care about hurting human over his love for music.. and then in like the same or next chapter the mc goes and f!ck other mens wifes.. of all the people in that institution, i would say that the partients with the numbers seems more sane then the rest!... i didnt get far at all.. so some might say this isent a fair review.. i dont really care.. i dropped this sh!t after chapter 3 or 4.. yes it was that bad!.. ?.. but yh you welcome to try, you might like it.. but for sure this isent for me and never will be.. good luck and have fun..
We have seen this kind of novels....the mc start thing with his dick.. Start fucking every girl he sees...and when he becomes powerful he starts acting like a dickhead...am not saying it's bad but this kind of novels leave a bad taste in my mouth....if am not wrong he will start forcing some ladies to have *** with him if they want to be Superstars
Alright, so I guess this is the obligatory norm in this situation? But this is the 10th review. So I shall, ahem...shamelessly give myself 5 stars. As well as offer my own personal critique of my novel. I will avoid spoilers and only give what I think needs to be said.**Take this with a grain of salt as I am a completely new author striving to hone my skills.For starters, as this is made there are slightly over 60 chapters to the serialization. Much of the world has yet to be explored on both front; however, this wasn't the purpose of Volume 1.The background of the game world has been given but the complete state of both the real and game world hasn't. This will serve the purpose of generating flow in the next volume. I will try to intricately formulate scenarios that express the world's state without providing humongous lore dumps.As for character molds, I tried to veer away from the scripted and make their reactions fleshly and oftentimes comical depending on the situations. Characters with backstories, however, will have more distinct personality scenes as showed a few chapters already.Some might think the pacing for the level up and character gains are too swift, BUT, I try to this to the idea of low levels usually passing by quickly as with a real game. However, the novel will be incorporating many different paces to add diversity. So sit tight on that.Moreover, the common tropes found in these novels—I try to develop mine further. For example, the random reincarnation is not so random and instead facilitated by a being. Secondly, the random teacher making the MC OP ties into a deeper purpose; the power creep isn't easily gained.All in all, I've put a fair amount of effort that continuously accumulates into this novel. As a result, I hope you enjoy this novel as much as possible if you do give it a read. Thank you~
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This story is a wild adventure of epic! With a MC that makes you feel as if you’re sitting on your best friend’s couch, watching him play games late at night and a complex structure that engulfs the reader in its world, you won’t want to put it down. It’s evident the author has put a painstaking amount of research into video games, monsters, VR and Asian culture. This is a story that places you in the middle of a death game and you aren’t sure if you’ll survive the next boss fight. Extremely well written and deserving of your read.
It feels very fake and the quality is below average. Sorry, no offence. I read the first few chapters and it was very basic and the articulation was not smooth at all. Even the smallest of details and cause dislike and irritation to the reader. The plot was also not too in depth, it went into the story line so quick that it just doesn't feel right.
Again people are spamming 5 ? rating even before it releases any chapter.Very Good and interesting plot...I read this kinda plot...I believe that one is orginal and well written unlike this.in that novel MC 1st disciple is Yandere.story was interesting but translation dropped that Novel.storyline , plot and character later ruined by Author and plot holes and Plot Armorit is very disappointing novel.Some people might like this if they didn't read this kind of novel.I say this is not worth it... storyline ruined by bad writing.
I read all the story so far and what I found is one of the most promising novel on the app. Our mc's system is not a cheat coming from who know which God but a true, hidden and mysterious system that works beneath the surface of things.The fact is, I really hope this goes high in ranks. As a reader and reviewer I'm sick to see the same stories always on top.need something fresh .. kudos!
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Some face slapping is always expected in a Chinese novel, but this one is just too much. The plot moves from face-slap 1, to set background for face slaps 2, and 3 with some mildly random face slaps in the middle that will help set up face slap 5... it's just too much.The novel follows a Pokemonish style where all the fighting and strength gathering is done by the pets, while the MC remains pretty useless 9so far). The MCs IQ being even lower than Ash's doesn't really help either.
great book, characters act realistically and the world is developing. sadly, there's not much more I can say as there are only 16 chaps out at the moment.