It was a freaking good book. I liked how it went and the scenes were so clear. It really i.pressed me more than I was initially expecting. It exceeded my expectations.
I'll be direct.
Love the work, don't understand why it doesn't have more views, want more of these kinds of novels.
So many people who are writing "reborn in a new world with a system" have ****ty grammar, nonsensical wish fulfilment storylines and stupid plot developments. I dont understand why they have 10s or 100s of times more views than this.
Now, with my rant out of the way, I'll give my grade to boost the novels rating as a straight 5, and give some of my selfish opinionated thoughts. I have only read somewhat after ch70, but in my self entitled opinion, that is enough to judge.
Writing quality - Hey, it's real English. Meaning there are no typos or stupid grammar or horribly translated, out of context sentences. And oh my god thank you for no repeating, overused and unimaginative descriptions like "it was like the difference between heaven and earth".
Story development - Somewhat irregular, but not in a bad way.
The important parts that you want to read are well detailed and narrated. The combat, the encounters, character interactions etc.
The tedious things like battle aftermath or uneventful traning are sorted out in a few paragraphs.
Character design - Interesting, strong(personality), and loveable characters. Or hateable depends on what floats ur boat.
The speech patterns between the character are easily recognisable and consistent.
World background - Didn't get much of it so far, but what I did, I liked.
Introduced Countries/kingdoms/empires seem interesting and promising, and the world seems to slowly be coming alive.
I still don't have any idea about the world's geography, like the amount of continents, world size or climate for that matter(other than it seems to constantly be cold. Maybe its winter idunno). But hey, neither do most Americans about earth(Ha). No offense, just stereotypeing.
Overall, quite an enjoyable read and much more deserving than most of the trash on the top charts, and with better writing quality. Save a few.
Hey, I said that I'd be direct, not quick.
This is a golden story, the storyline is awesome with a big world-building, I like the details and the fighting, I want one of those suits if possible,
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It's an intresting story that does NOT make the usual misstake of making the MC op, insted he's more of an broker that helps other grow stronger both by misstake and not.It has some common traits with other novels of the same genre but it goes above and beyond to be uniqe and orginal(in a good way).READ IT SND YOU WILL BE HOOKED
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This shits been here for 4months but the really good novels disappear after 1.Im extremely saltyI demand equalityAnd I demand quality novels
I love romance stories, i read romance light novels, i read shoujo manga, i've read a lot of these types of stories but the type that has a historical setting never made my sights but this one after giving it a read i have to say we got a great romantic story in the making here, impacable grammar, interesting characters, and a rare but welcome setting Egypt, are a few things that will make me come back for more so keep it going author this is promessing!