So my first impressions of this novel were actually pretty bad. Aside from the fact that it all reads like a first draft with zero editing, I was expecting an immensely cliche power fantasy. But, I will admit, the story has grown on me, and has actually surpassed my expectations. I've read all the way to the current chapter, 316, and am sad to be caught up, I was enjoying the binge read. A big reason why I am liking the story so far is it's somewhat slow paced. While the MC does belong to the OP category, the plot has made it so you really don't see that. He actually spends half the time struggling because he gets involved with things way above his level. Trust me, when I say the story just keeps getting better, and you get more invested in the characters as the story goes on. I strongly hope and advise the author keep putting in the effort to add more depth to the story, and especially characters. And certainly do not neglect the romance element. It has actually turned out very wholesome and I really like the few female lead characters introduced so far. Just avoid the terrible pitfall where they become damsels in distress who exist to rely on the MC and show no personality. That would be a disgrace to your writing.
An amazing book, not gonna lie, I only picked it up to get the 200 points for a recommend book, but I'm glad I did. It gives an accurate and detailed description of the world, the characters, and the abilities. There are some spelling mistakes, but they are fat fingers or he went to fast an repeated something. But the Author fixes them very quickly once pointed out. The MC might be overpowered, but there isn't any plot armor and he is very smart. So it doesn't seem that way. Over all a very, very good book and I'm waiting for my next fast pass to read some more!
I'm not going to be an shameless author, but I think I did good with this. So I hope whoever reads this enjoys it, and if you don't tell me what I did wrong so I can fix it.
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The writing quality is decent, the author does this EX: “Nevare get over here!” Anne runs over there.” It’s very annoying. The MCs emotions are training and being more humane than other orcs. Zero character development 41 chapters in. Overall mid novel
It´s a very good novel. However, the problem is I am not sure what to expect of it and whether it will still continue its quality. Honestly hope author still stay focused on eternal cultivation of alchemy.
this novel is good and great so far but still had a little bit of bad grammar but still good ?.also, the author is great at updating the chapter soo nice.so I will recommend it.?????
Now this is what i call a Good Novel.First lets talk about about the Main Character he is Smart and Decisive that's already a plus right there and another one is he has his priorities straight goddamn it, im sick and tired of mc's getting distracted every little thing that shows up in front of them.now for the world itself admittedly i don't know much because i just binged the 60 chapters but so far the side characters are unraveling the the power system and factions quite naturally? or at least i think they by informing the MC and the viewer at the same time so take that as you will.i guess the only minor plot hole at least to me that could happen later on to the story would the reaction of the game developers to the MC's quick rise to power, As with most novels of this type or at least those that i have read is that they will either brush it off or just ignore it all together but then again how can you realistically explain how a dev group could make an a game with abnormally advance AI that could react to whatever the player is doing in their own way so yeah.Conclusion = all in all a solid novel to waste some time and enjoy and once you get hooked on it make a 180 turn as you see this site pick some shitty novel over the other less shitty novels.And that's about it Stay safe you pieces of shit
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I should know from the title and the cover that this is going to hurts. I pick this for horror not for feels. :ugly crying: I have a small hope that Archie will stay and haunting Ethan but I know that is selfish. The story ended in the most perfect and beautiful way but it hurts! I really don't understand how the school let the perfect just do the crimes but I guess reputation matters the most to them.Anyway, :sob:, here, takes the solid 5* from me