It's easy to read, I don't really know about grammar or such things so I can't really tell if it was bad or good.. sorry for that :DBut what I can tell is, that you put a lot of work in writing in it.. so please continue your good work :)
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If you read this for its tags, prepare to get roasted. This book is a parody of web novel cliches, and I've been laughing as much as I'm questioning my taste in books. The mc is intelligent at the start for once, which is nice as well. However... he also makes poor decisions imo. At least they're thought out. We'll see who's right as the story progresses
So far they are few chapters (9) but it is very interesting and funny, Jane is not OP but she is strong and I hope she gains more strength in the course of history.I love the chosen gender !!
Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! I’d love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?
Hi author I was just very curious if this story you have written will be continued or if you are going to drop the story and if you do drop/continue the story please do inform us
trash pure trash nothing else a huge time waste gramer trash , character development trash , option system itself is lame and most of all the author is a cheat and Frick u
go author you can do this ill wait for the next chapter even if it take months,just don't drop this ,there so much hypnosis genre here but so little are nice
Holy **** this story is good. Character development, reasonable and thoughtful romance, a clear goal for the mc, and even fantasy settings and a system? If this isn’t a good ass story, flip me over and slam a rock on my ass. Bet. Also the technical side of the story is good. Haven’t seen grammar mistakes, lengthy chapters, and thoughtful descriptions.
great start .....!, no comedy element yet .. have to see .. hope he gets harder options in future.. harem come on .. more monster girls n...
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Hey there. I've now dropped my review on your book to show well deserved support. I've been looking for an interesting book for a while.You are amazing.