Totally agree. Its like this is a story of villains and a competition to see who is the best scheming villain
I love it i hope the author keeps up the fantastic work
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Hello, I am creating a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage -> (Ze nithnovels), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
This book is really amazing ❤️❤️... at first I wasn't getting it but later it all synced.. and I really love the story..❤️
Amazing
Another great action to add to my collection. I also love how you write your grammar is really nice. I expect good works in the future. Keep up the good work author
I like this a lot, its interesting and the concept is cool. Hope for more chapters though. Overall, either wait for more or enjoy it chapter by chapter.
Well, looks like another novel is being dropped.. Paid so much on Privilege too... Sad to see it go like that.
I am in love with all your books. I am your number one fan
It’s meh. Characters are flat and boring. Which is nothing new on Webnovel.
World is fine.
Plot feels like it’s meandering a bit. It lacks a goal or purpose.
It’s a time filler. It does nothing new or interesting. But also nothing wrong depending on what you value. I value interesting characters. So it left me feeling a bit cold.
Chapter 1928 now.I loved the story and still do but I find that after going through ALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL (hundreds upon hundreds) of chapters DEDICATED TO THE ONE SCENE (the war) I’m tired of the too many details and drawn out fights that seem to never end with an annoying amount of unnecessary details that the Author seems to LOVE to provide us with. I know that the author probably just wants to provide world building or immersion or whatever… but is it too much to ask that we get straight to the point (aka the main story line with her facing her actual rivals) and not spend 100s of chapters dedicated to a TEST that sets the stage for the main scene? There are authors who have said more with less if you know what I mean. With how far I’ve been I would be absolutely horrified at the PROSPECT of re-reading this story for funzies. Honestly would be a nightmare. Love the story but the plot progression — or over-abundance of details I should say — scares me and I find myself skimming because honestly? Most of these details are not even necessary. You think they are in the moment. But they’re really not. Some people might like the “side plots” (if they can even be called that) but I don’t.Love Ainsley and the characters and where this story is going but we could get their a liiiiiittle faster with some cuts.
Five stars because I like my story.Welcome to my second novel!I already wrote and (nearly, depending on when you read this) finished my first novel Lightning Is the only Way at over 1300 chapters.There have been some mistakes in my first novel since it was, well, my first novel. This one is my second novel, and I rectified those mistakes.When I write, I mainly focus on emotions. It doesn't matter which one, power, loss, depression, happiness, whatever. I believe novels have to evoke emotions in the reader, and that's what I focus on. You can give me whatever feedback you want, as long as it's actual feedback. Have fun reading!