It's a really great book even though it still has room for improvement the author makes up for it with effort. It's impressive seeing an author who builds up more than one Mc in a book. Good luck and keep it up. Grimfire out...
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WebNovel you have been a major disappointment so far. It seems money can make you even sell your mothers. I once read an article somewhere complaining about your mode of conduct. It stated that you don't give shit about anybody, including yourselves, apart from money. Now I can see their point crystal clear.
What can I say................Lin Fan the MOTHERF*CKING HUMAN KING IS BACK WITH A TWIST???....................................................
Everything is perfect except for lack of R+18 / Romance . honestly I'm surprised myself seeing there's no R+18 as the author usually include R+18 on every novel of his .
A very interesting read turning the afterlife into a game. I loved the creative approach of the author in how they explained the afterlife and the process of waiting to meet the king of the underworld. One thing that threw me off was that the king of the underworld was a female although constantly being referred to as King which is normally a term saved for males.Other than that the writing was great the pacing amazing throughout. The way the character grows in the game and outpaces many other players out of sheer determination was interesting to see and reminds me of some people I know in real life who are the same way when gaming.All in all. Great work author! It was a fun read and it is exciting to see where the story will go next.
I read some of the raws of this novel and i found it quite to my liking hope this will get pick up... vote for this!!this novel has potential!! almost 2000 chaps.
Para que se hagan una idea de lo lento que va este libro, por el capítulo 90 recién va pasando un solo día y recién salen de una prueba que tendría que haber terminado en menos de la mitad de esos capitulos,un arco donde presentan a tres demonios que ni siquiera vamos a recordar solo para salir de una puta prueba que dura como 15 capitulos
I like how the story is progressing so far but I'll suggest you to proofread the chapters once as there are a few grammatical errors. I've pointed out a few though. Anyway, great job! Keep writing!
I really like this novel, it has solid background, great storyline just sometimes author forgot or completely ignore logic that comes in way to make mc OP. LITERALLY he totally neglect logics to make mc OP like - 1)how he can make potions at physic enrichment rank without a training or hard work and that are 10 times better than currently existing in that world( can't believe it). 10 times better are you kidding me, the world alredy has potions that are best from deity realm and he has 10 times better one(with cheap materials) and can make like nothing, let's say THE EMPYRIAN CHAOS IS from plane above the deity realm or strongest there even then it doesn't make sense why the hell did that entity (or his fellow cultivators almost of same realm) invest his time in the starting realm of cultivation and even that much that he make such heaven defying potions. F...u...c.........,.....,.............2) he just discover 13th SEAL with just a thought, he thought and poof.. he discover the 13th seal. All other characters or billions of trillions people in past and in present are what idiots or I am the one who is. And even THE GREATEST EMPYRIAN CHOS CAN MAKE THE STUPID POTION HEAVEN DEFYING BUT HE DON'T INVEST HIS TIME TO WORK ON 13TH SEAL WHICH I SUPPOSE IS FAR IMPORTANT THAN THAT FUCKING POTION AND TELL HIM THAT "BODY AND SOUL ARE SAME. AHHHHHHHHH......FUCK....no character development, I think he is more mature at start before he gets the bumbo jumbo his parents left behind, now he is like a arrogant **** who do messes with anyone without giving a thought about consequences. It's like the more story progresses the more he get arrogant