I like how he prefers to create new routes, stories and characters, even though the problem is the stability of the updates, neat at least I think this is readable
Hi everyone so I allow myself to make a self-criticism towards this novel and in the meantime I don't love it because it's mine (a little) but it's also that I like this kind of Extra story and this project stayed in my mind for a little while, I'm also writing a novel called Slayer of the God or great reincarnation of the vengful god slayer and you can see that my review on it was a bit disappointing unlike SSS Extra, this novel was a test to see if I was really ready to write a novel and now I'm sure with the beginning of SSS Extra
Ahem! What am i doing in the review section when I haven't read a single chapter? ?it's simple. The synopsis alone got me hooked ?Can't wait to dive in. Author has adamantly refused to disappoint!! ???
A very interesting read. Though the genre and style seems common the author strongly emphasizes story and character development. The author strikes a great balance between the otherworld life and the "real" life in the novel which is the key to writing in the dual life genre.The setting and world building need a little work because theyre too generic and very little is written about them. Just a city and a village. Needs time, culture, and technological settings at least. Magic is there but to what extent? Theres too many basic questions left unanswered for 200 chapters.The MC is written well as a person and has so far (200chapters) developed well in character. His persona as a struggling person is deeply rooted and not awkward or forced which is reflected well in his speech to choices and distrust of people. +points for well written desperation and seething anger.Though he is given OP skills his actions are not really too absurd and does not take the reader out of immersion. The author does fall into the summoner having too much summons that they become forgettable trap, it seems like the author is holding himself back for now.Side characters are written very well. The sister gives life to the MC and showcases his more familial and caring side. She herself highlights both their backgrounds and motivations. A well written character that provides impetus for the MC to improve himselve and strive for something more.The first opponent provided a satisfying and believeable character arc. A cliche that was believeable and satisying even if a cliche.The main antagonists are capable, smart, uncaring, self-righteous, and provide a satisfying foil to the MC. The hero can only be as good as the villains he defeats and the villains make you love to hate them.Though the story, setting, and some elements are predictable, the style and characters make this story fresh and an easy good read.
Already my top 1 far surpassing Subahibi, Zaregoto, Umineko, Monogatari, Peak fiction, words can't describe how well written this is, i hope i can patron you by donating 10,000,0000,000$ from my black american express card?
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I like this story very much, Download this for just this story ????
Although just started, I'm loving every bit of this novel.Looking forward to more chapters.
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Hi there, Author here. I'm just a newbie writer trying to make a better story from the first attempt. Hope you all will support me.
Overall this is an amazing story with twists and turns. the world building is magnificent and so is the characters