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Drop this it’s not worth it, just read my new story this one is effecting in a bad way so I’m dropping but I’ll be giving you a new one instead it’s called days gone under the shade it’ll short in the word count but long in chapters and you can suggest me the worlds you want me to add cause this story will be on a multiversal level eventually.
To whom it may concern,Author, parents, significant other, brother or sister, friends, or acquaintance, I hope all is well. It’s been 4 years since the last chapter was updated, I was hoping if author or someone knows the author if she is doing okay. There is still few, dozen, hundreds or even thousand of readers still coming back to check if this novel was updated. I’ve come to love this novel since author started it, I wish to know and everyone else if this is the end of it.There was no closure to this novel, author suddenly disappeared. I really hope author is okay and doing well, maybe just long writers block. Wish you all the best!Best regards,Grandmaster Yu.
CRITICAL REVIEW Read up to current latest release 71/71It's not bad. Very lightnovelish and anime-like written story. I don't really have much to comment about it surprisingly. There's some persona inspiration which is awesome. As for the romance, I can't tell if the mc is being oblivious or is dense. I assume the former. A complaint would be that while I did like it, the heroines seem easy to fall in love with the mc. Ngl it really seems to be resembling a tras*y isekai webnovel. Then again it can technically be excused since it is a dating sim world... but I value realism so it bugs me. As the story progesses the mc also appears to be falling into the shoes of becoming a true generic mc. Please try and avoid that. This is a frequent occurring issue in most 'mob stories', which defeats the purpose of the mob genre. It's hard, so just try and make it so he doesn't seem generic. Another issue I've had is that the novel does seem to kinda rush things somewhat. It kinda gives off the impression of skipping/wandering around with no truly meaningful substantial progress. An example would be when the story introduces Elicia. (Spoiler) Okay so then have an event together and then everything is just glossed over. They are friends I guess? We barely see any interactions which is different from someone like Luna who we see a lot of and see clear development of and most importantly... REASON TO CARE- that's how I express it. It's much like Isabel and Elizabeth where everything feels glossed and not substantial. They don't give me reason to care enough. And its not enough to tell, but you must show it. Luna feels "show" while others feel like "tell".Some spoilers~Grigory is awesome but his prestige falls the further you are in the novel. Perhaps its because of my expectations for him of being like a double-edged sword. The seemingly ominpotent power he brings in exchange for something precious later along the line. Because right now, he's basically a full-on slave for the mc. I had hopes of him being a very nightmare-like being for the mc that hes forced to use. But with the tone of the story and all, Grigory is just likable and comical.Much like my other reviews, I always end by trying to ship.As not all heroines are introduced (I think), I suppose I ship the MC with Elicia since I'm a fan of tragic heroines. Even tho we barely know her.I hope this doesn't end in a harem ending!
This is the first fic I've recommended to anyone ever in the years I've been on WN. It's that good. The author has found the perfect balance between Canon, VRMMO elements and an original storyline for the MC.This isn't one of those stories where the MC is supposedly not focused on gaining a harem or fucking the female cast into mindless slaves like so many others.Its not the usual world domination, the sith bs or the wannabe jedi bs nor the usual supposedly grey Force user.This guy is just like you and I, a real person, one who uses Jedi as his class but isn't some monk or depraved idiot, this guy is like a regular gamer whose moral spectrum remains that of a regular person, one whose out for profit without it being vulgar, one who has fun without it becoming some random slice of life shtick.I'm seriously fond of the story so far. It makes you feel like you're at the forefront of a true exploration in the VRMMO world at the dawn of full emersion technology, and Disney is right there capitalising on it and pushing it with the Starwars VRMMO that we have all dreamed of as fans.Stats exist, but the game isn't entirely centric on them, nor is the story, they add to your characters capabilities, a bit like expandable perks to be build up upon in call of duty, instead of perks like last stand.Its simply awesome. I go to bed dreaming I'm in this mmo at night, in the guild with this MC. It's just really cool.
Author here so of course I rated my own work with 5 stars. check out what I have written so far. I plan to release chapters regularly. Hopefully you will enjoy.
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Thanks for reviews and supports as this story got award the third place @ WPC 142
Definitely a good book. It 100% follows the title of the book by having a character that wants to learn about the new world he has been placed in. Very nice read.
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