"觉醒" means "awaken" or "awakening.""每日" means "daily.""情报面板" translates to "information panel" or "intelligence board.""肝" in gaming slang refers to grinding or working hard in a game."成" means "become.""万法真仙" translates to "True Immortal of Ten Thousand Laws," which can imply a highly skilled or powerful character in a game or fantasy setting."Awaken the daily intelligence board and grind to become a True Immortal of Ten Thousand Laws". Would be a better name than the current one. "Awakening the intelligence panel, the liver becomes a fairy."There are also numerous times when cultivation techniques aren't properly translated but overall the traduction quality is far above simple MTL. Keep up the good work.
the story has a promising introduction and the character sounds awesome
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Nice write up. I love itHoping for Tamara and Axel should fall in love soon.
I've read until the first time Ophelia and Mika meet, at the end of the exam.The system is interesting and some sort of non-isekai getting game'd but for Mika.I think there's gonna be some subversion which make this interesting, yet I'm not into much this worldsetting. Still, it has some hook.Gotta say, I'm not into this kind of power-trip "fantasy has to be like an rpg" + HxH tropes, and the writing has problems.First, grammar.Revise it.Second, there's out-of-nothing information dumps or little to no info when things happen, making it kind of dissonant.I'm a mangaka, so I can't give many writing advice beyond *rythm*, and with a story that begins with a mystery, information should be done little by little, and not give spoilers beforehand. Let the reader see that he will win without the narrator telling them when and how before the action happens.Otherly, the descriptions of physical appearances are too much vague. We don't have much info about how it does resemble our world.What is a military uniform in this context? Is it Medieval? Is it Modernist? From were? What kind of robe? What kind of badges?Or the weapons.What's the type of sword the MC has? Is it straight? Is it pointy towards the end? Diamond cross section? Is the cross section maybe hexagonal? Has a fuller? Maybe leaf-shaped?Maybe it's the format of Webnovel that doesn't let authors to put in-between illustrations to give visual information, and it's something that it's seen on the purchased version, which unfortunately, I'm currently unable to have.Still, remind you that even with all the criticism, it has hook and expected subversions of the tropes, so I'm hopeful this arrives to good ports.Good luck and good writing, friend!
Despite the fact that English is not the native language of the author, the novel is easily understandable, well written and quite fun! Start is a little slow but the characters are very interesting and the MC is relatable. Props to this author!
The novel is good. Lots of action scenes from the start! And its great! The characters and world background is good. It got me hooked and will continue reading it! Good work author!
Idiot is the personality of the mc.Idiot is the one thing that I can confirm in the mc.The whole 41 chapter of story is monotone where it just exists in this novel.Dont even mention the stats of the world and it's people
Characters were well developed and introduced so 5 star. I like how things seems unique but I know that it has at least an inspiration. I read the first few chapters and noticed that world background is slowly introduced and explained since it has an uncommon power standard world which most common fantasies makes so identical when it comes to world background. At least mostly, not all. I think I would recommend this to others since it has a new concept of becoming a system. It is more like he was reincarnated into a system and his life depends on his host which he nurtured and surprisingly, the host is not stupid and lovable. She actually learn things. That's all! Kudos my friend!
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