Story is okay ...but it could have been better ..there are several loopholes ....and majority of scences seem incomplete.....?? to me.....hope u understand.
What worrywart we talking about ??? Anyway, idk what to say about this so let's just review this.....>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Mohammad fought bcz he wanted empire. he wanted to make a religion where people worship him. he was a tyrant and barbarian also a peaedophile. Muslim are still fighting they r the embodiment of terrorism.
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I lost my interest when pest was introduced. now even after skipping like 15 chaps and reading chap 34, I still can't get my interest back. Good writing skills author and very detailed. I just lost interest because of that pest so I will have to go as I cannot force myself tod read what I do not like. Good luck an have fun!
The grammar has its issue but overall the story is great. I'd appreciate if the author improved his writing but apart from that am rooting for this book, added to my library.
Grammar is terrible. Plot makes 0 sense. There is 0 world building, and I still don't know what the **** is happening. Lastly, the retardation level is over 9000.I'll give it a 5/5
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The Story is good and everything but if it was a bit more realistic would've been 5/5 i mean come on, a teenager talking about killing someone? ordering his family members around, etc*Sigh* and i was looking around for this kind of novel but i dropped it and now it's been 2 days looking for something similar all of them are chinese/ bad english which i drop at chapter 1~3
Great Potential. Al thought currently there's only 6 chapters, it quite good.
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The backround story isn´t bad I hope later it answered why the MC was able to get back in time. And the MC is likeable but I wonder why when his family is so much worth to him why he doesn´t talk to his sister.Bad points are :- The author makes the MC with quest rewards so OP but then scale the opponent in his level range up so that the MC has to take effort to kill them. He totally forgot what this would mean if other players would to fight against such opponents.- You could forget at minimum one digit in all stats, hp etc.-To often are the stats of the MC postet and the fights mostly are damage report.