It starts out quite well and the type has a lot possibilities.But then you get some bad one dimensional characters quite fast: oh you offended me or I don't belive you, I will just attack you. Also the world development iis very limited and seriously one-sided. Everything must only be for the best of humanity, without any realistic considerations of how people actually act.
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Story is okay I guess.The Mc have too many superpower that is unnecessary to the story,this is not a Chinese novel lol.One last thing,for god sakes please choose Saitama or Camden as name not freaking both in the story,its making me mad just why can't you choose one to use.
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The characters are really well developed, and I like the sense if mystery with the mc. Currently gathering as much fast passes as possible. :)
Love the direction that the story is heading. Keep up the good work
so far the story is well written and interesting enough to keep you hooked for more.Hopefully author will push up his release rate a bit ?
It's interesting to read
It's a great one Author, keep it up.
I love it......
This is such an interesting story, update, please!
The flow of this is fantastic.