I like it where can i continue to read it?? ??
Wow!!!! Of all the simulation stories that I have read, this is probably the very best. Nothing can compare. So far there is 3 people simulating at the same time. 1 MC and 2 rulers who are competing for the MC's talents. The story is suggesting that it will go up to 1 MC an 7 rulers eventually competing for him. They are all simulating and trying to fix mistakes in their previous simulations. As they are competing on a national scale as rulers they are competing for the MC as well as being constrained by the factions in their own governments. Corruption causing problems while the MC is trying to drive reform while the rulers want to support the MC in his reforms with heavy resistance from the existing factions.This is one that I can only hope gets picked up.
(Currently 168 chapters in)At first it seemed like a normal vrmmorpg novel with the restart utilizing the knowledge from previous life, however what this novel does way better than any other that I’ve read is that the author is taking his time through the story, the fights aren’t instant and only lead way to power ups. This novel created a downside to the increase of power in the real world, allowing for an even greater sense of danger. The world is being slowly built upon and making it deeper than the 2d worlds of other similar novels. I’m enjoying the flow of the story where everything seems to have meaning and the characters can think for themselves. One of the greatest things is that the OPness of the MC isn’t dictated by one item he randomly found, it’s his class which gets stronger the more effort and suffering he goes though making for a much more immersive/rewarding story. Overall, Awesome novel my dude! Top tier! ?
just a shameless author giving 5 stars here
The story development is superb with an interesting plot, steady update and well detail character description. I love your work, thou I don't read this genre but this got me hooked.
The idea of this novel is very unique and the plot is unlike anything I've ever read before. The synopsis also made me feel curious. Overall, I believe there needs to be an improvement in your writing but you have great potential. Keep writing!
I’d say that this book is excellently written. The storyline is flowing really well, and the characters feel alive. So keep up the good work author !
This is good, please continue!
Forgive me for my bluntness in this review. I really do not have a personal grudge against the author; he is actually one of my good friends. And honestly, besides the writing quality portion, the review isn't much of a roast.Writing Quality: Has definitely improved since the author's last novel, but it is nowhere near perfect. The reason is because of inappropriate word choice and sentence structure (he is almost always in the passive) that makes both enjoyable and easy reading near impossible. For example, to describe tears and emotion, the author used (not an exact quote): "He was so sad that tears fell down his face and the white membrane became red." Red and white membrane?? This strange wording distracts the reader from focusing on the emotions. Apart from this, the author's style is more comedic, and the writing seems to be more detached everywhere else. The author also uses different variations of English, sometimes British English and sometimes American. Stability of Updates: automatic 5 because the author has a positive record.Story Development: To some, it might be a bit too fast, and to others, it'll be too slow. To me, it's too fast-paced. By chapter 6, we are already in the first scenario, and the main character got used to the system and this world he is in way too quickly. Even though he now has the memories of his past life in this new world, he should still be at least dazzled.Character Design: I could feel that the characters were all very well thought out, from the way the main character had to experience all of the experiences his soul had in order to feel motivated to take revenge and/or live. World Background: Again, I could feel that everything was well thought out, from the intricacies of the system (a genre that I find to be actually extremely difficult to handle) to the different characters and their stories that were introduced.Work hard, Ansu chan (seven)!
I really liked thr authors sarcastic style, it's really interesting! The story gradually captivates you making you not help but keep on reading! There is nothing else to say other than it's amazing!
So our mc transmigrate to another world where there are martial spirits, they thought he was really talented until they discovered he has no martial spirit. Well of course just like any other novel out there, our mc 'suddenly' have found a cheat where he can devour martial spirits. So it is kinda cliche but If you are into stories like this, you could give it a try.