well , i actually liked this novel, and thought it was interesting. Bad news then. after 350 chapters, everything that he did and gained were for nothing. the novel starts again in a new realm , and he lost EVERYTHING , all treasures, all especial constitutions , all intents. and copy the plot from The most generous master ever, word for word, just changing the name.
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Writing Quality: Honestly Good and captures everything very well. Story development: Plot is very interesting and the beginning I've read so far is very well done. Character Design: Amazing so far! Updating Stability: Seems good to me and has 30+chapters already! World Background seems fantastic as well!!!
Everything about this novel is good except the mc's progressing. I mean there so many level to the top that it will take literally 1000 chp to finish pbly. Thats why I currently stopped at 189 and waiting for at least 500 chp. Otherwise everything seems perfect to me especially the harem. I like how the girls get along so well.
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Story starts of decently. But around chapter 100 the story starts to drag and at chapter 200 it grows bad. On the positive side, if you like face slapping this story might be for you, but let me explain.
a usual progression of a martial arts novel formula is usually: overarching plot -> current plot -> introduction of enemy, most of the time both long and short term enemy -> face slapping -> winning some reward -> repeat above.
this novel is different starting at chapter 200 its all about:
introduction of short term enemy -> face slapping -> repeat
or in other words its invincible dragon but meant seriously. i could swear, that i read the sentence 'MC was so strong that...'
either way, only read if you like the above mentioned formula. i dont know how many tens of chapters and how many enemies it has been since the plot really progressed.
This story is pretty good so far, in fact it seems like it might be a REALLY good story. It reminds me a lot of Coiling Dragon. But it’s a more rough I guess? A lot of cultivation novels are basically constant face smacking and womanizing MC’s. Coiling dragon had some faceslaps, but because it wasn’t forcing face slaps down us readers throats, among several other reasons, it’s a really good novel. This seems to be a kind of mix between the two, but it’s leaning more towards coiling dragon. I’m so tired of the Mc being called trash constantly for 10 chapters straight and then being called godly for 1 chapter or so, and cycle repeat. The city lord guy doesn’t immediately try to kill/torture MC because he accidentally touched his daughters boob, but investigates the situation. He also doesn’t immediately ridicule and call MC trash for not having a high cultivation at age 20. Which is a big thumbs up for me, it means characters in this novel probably won’t have the iq of a fucking coffee table with 0 foresight. All in all looking forward to it’s future.
So far, as a sneak peek novel, this is great. I look forward to being able to read more of it. Keep up the good work, author! I especially enjoy when he tells people to shut it hahaha
Fast paced and everything is ok-ish...But sometimes I question whether I reading English or other language....Pls,pls,pls improve your writing quality or you will keep losing your potential readers
Probably too early to write a review but I will write one for now to be reviewed later. The writing quality is of great quality, the characters are well defined for their roles, the military worldbuilding is nice so far and the updates is perfect. The chapters are long which I personally think is good.
The storyline is developing well too but I will wait for more chapters to see better. But, so far, so good. Keep up the good work.
Es chocante ver como alguien del sector cultural de un país "Escritor" , puede arrodillarse de semejante manera para mamar pijas a un pensamiento político que no representa su estatuto económico.Y mas aun es impensable que el publico popular culto de china "Lectores" pueda tragar semejante mierda y pagar para que le inflen el estomago de pensamientos políticos ultra-derechistas.No solo no recomendable, sino evitable.