While I appreciate the author's efforts, I've come to realise that this story is not for me. Its not bad, but it does not hold my interest for the most part. The grammar and structure of the story is not so great and I realise if I pursue this novel further, its going to be more expensive, which I'm not willing to pay if a story does not hold my interest. In addition, I get the impression that in future chapters there is likely to be a harem which I do not like.
The story on a whole is okay, it was interesting for me reading the first 9 chapters and the ML did not once open his mouth. I also got to admire the 2 masters who decided to give him a new life. Wish the author good luck in their storytelling endeavors. But unfortunately this story will not stay in my library. Take care.
A simple yet engaging read. The story flows well and the dialogue between characters is crafted nicely, in addition to the believable atmosphere that surrounds these characters. You can feel what they're going through.
This feel fitting to say that the website has fallen.
Catering to being a cuck fetish.... I remember see the other possible trail reads besides this book and there was some good ones but no... either sign-in system or cuck system.... my soul hurts it truly does
To be honest when I first started the book I wasn’t expecting much, but when you read deeper into the novel it becomes so much more intresting and while it may hint of other novels such as “Only I level up solo”, it puts a twist on those things making it have a overall charm to it. Overall it is a outstanding book and I cant wait for more chapters!
hahaha, i do like that the mc's power lame and get sent to the unimpressive school,* thumbs up* a squishy face, haha like spongebob overall its a good read, i recommend it, keep up the good work author! KUDOS to you!
This was right above mine in the promote you novel section so I thought I would give it a try. I did enjoy it actually and am glad I clicked it. It can now rest on the shelves of the other saved novels I like to read. Thank you!
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int main(){
std::cout<<"KEEP UPDATING BRO. ITS REALLY A NICE WORK. I LOVED THE STORY SO FAR................,.................................";
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}
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beside miss spelling for gender,I think this book is good...............,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,...,.,.,.,,.,.,.,,
there a few typos but an enjoyable book so far.the pacing is a little quick but good for a web novel. could help to be a little be generous with describing the monster girls and maybe add some more banter between the MC and his system .
I think the only problem with the is the biggeSt deal breaker the passing is HORRIBLE i mean itS baaaaadddd and hard to understand ...........
if you also made a story following the serial killers point of view that would be truly amazing ????????????????? and I'd definitely read!!!!