Hate it. MC is illogical and I can spot mistakes in some places. Some people could like this but it really isn’t for me. Everything is just… it hurts my brain in some places so I can’t continue reading.
webnovel is becoming corrupted and being more greedy .........................................................................................
I like it, but it feels like I’m reading every other senior brother cultivation novel I’ve ever read. i like the golden finger of this novel but it’s really under used in my opinion.
I remember the author saying he won't make this a harem despite mmc aving multiple love interests I have a feeling they won't live till the end of the tale R.I.P
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Hello, this is my WPC 254 Overpowered Male Lead Entry Contest. I will try my best to update daily, but no guarantee on that since Life is always unpredictable. However, I can guarantee that as long as we reach the powerstone goal, then there will definitely be a chapter popping out. Therefore, vote and support this poor author.In addition, any questions or doubts in your mind regarding this book can ask in this review itself. I will do my best to answer each and every one of them without spoiling much of the story itself. Thank you and have a nice day!
The novel is based on villain, so expect some evil tendencies in his character. He has got a good head in his shoulder and is able to think calmly in situations. So go ahead and read it.And thank you Translator sama ~ for translating this, I just want you to know your work is being appreciated, atleast by me.I hope you can continue translating more, pretty please ?
Lackluster. The chapters are monotonous, there are more dialogues and system prompts than actual storytelling. The worldbuilding is confusing. The author does not have a satisfying vocabulary, he keeps saying "the fog makes the world gloomy" every two chapters or so.Not worthy a read.
Hello, Author here. This is a story I started on a whim for WPC #192 and somehow won bronze.
The first 20 or so chapters are just me searching for directions I should be taking this novel to. So, many ideas that pop up there don't last for long. Especially, the dual personality.
However, the world I build up during these times is not random.
Also, please do not expect the MC to be a genius or something, and just enjoy what he does.
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Do read and enjoy this slice of life story. I promise that this story will bring you both joy and heartbreak.
Also, let me know how you feel about the story. I am open to suggestions as well.
Hi I just finished reading all the chapters that you posted and you left me wanting more and more ! so when I realize that such masterpiece didn’t have a review I was shocked! So I’m here to show my appreciation to your work ! Please continue with your hard work ! That being said...
Writing Quality: it’s pretty good, I didn’t notice any big mistakes in your grammar. For me it was very fluid, I read all 40 chapters in one go and I never felt tired ! I enjoyed reading it and that’s the most important thing for me.
Updating Stability: I can't say much about it, so I’ll trust you and give you 5 stars. Please continue to update frequently!
Story Development: I say it’s a good rhythm, not so slow but not so fast, until now you pretty much followed the original rhythm of the manga which is good for me. Although I felt like the MC should do more physical training, like sparing with tang or something like that, for what you write it seems that he just do some heavy work out and meditate but that alone doesn’t give him experience on real battle. Until now that wasn’t a problem because he never encountered anyone who was stronger than him in real fight ( I’m not counting the exam to enter Shrek Academy, because if the professor had take it seriously, Joy would lose ). Other than that I notice that the MC try hard to not change the original events, which I can understand, but that can become very boring in the future, until now that’s not a problem because it still just in the beginning of the plot. Overall I’m loving it !
Character Design: I have nothing to say about it, l pretty much see him as Aizen before betraying Soul Society, I didn’t paid too much attention to his description so I can’t say much, I’m sorry !
World Background: I recently started reading Doulou Dalu, I didn’t finished so I can say much. However I thought it was clever the idea of using the infinity stones as material soul ! MCU it’s not my forte, although I watched the movies I was never a die hard fan of the comics.
For now that’s all I can give you, I’ll do another review in the future. I hope it was helpful!
I’m sorry I can’t give you a more detailed review, I’m usually to shy to Write anything, this is my first review ever T^T
Obs: please take in consideration that English it’s not my native language so I apologize for any mistakes
character is to stupid, and the early life gets rushed through with the writer spending more time trying to justify his stupidity than be writing a believable character