Well crafted novel. If the first 2 chapters do not cling, then further chapters, and especially tests. They rivet the desire to find out what will happen next with the main character. I would like to know more about the world and the wanderings of the protagonist.
Wow, this is a great book. I love martial arts
new concepts, nice esque, keep rolling the ch. out
I want to read this buttttttttttttttttttttttt of course the only probably is faloo.............................................................................
didn't read beyond the freely available chapters but from what I read, it was extremely slow space. it takes forever to level up and it seriously needs an editor, too many typos and grammatical mistakes.This novel was not for me.
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This work has great potential, I can view that from the synopsis although it's short. The first paragraph with the word 'lemme' confused me. It's only a few chapters but it's a good read but the author needs to work more in the grammars and paragraphs. Overall, it's a good read as I've mentioned
JosieGan has been doing an excellent job so far with this novel. Regarding the character design I have read a few novels involving the reincarnated immortal plot and many authors for some reason like making their MC's absolute clowns after reincarnating. The author did a great job even though MC maintains his memories/abilities he's not some GigaChad rushing into stupidly danger. He tactically thinks things through and plans accordingly.As for the writing quality considering the author isn't a native English speaker and English is his third or fourth chosen language I have had no issues following the authors writings. The only issue I came across are a few errors on the pronouns but I have noticed that those errors are slowly beginning to reduce. JosieGan pumps out two to three chapters daily. While frequently updating his other two books that are free which I highly recommended everyone to check out because they are great as well.As far World Background so far they are the typical continent's (North, South, West, East, and Central) but the author goes into detail throughout the novel explaining it so it becomes clear. There will be no 15-30 chapters spent explaining how it works.
Well honestly the story was good. It has some interesting things if you know what I mean. I only gave this a 3.8 because of CCCRP ( common chinese cliche romance plot ) scene where the fl separates with mc cuz she got some unique physique like IJPDYB (Ice Jade Phoenix Divine Yin Physique /Body ) which attracted a SEOIV ( Supreme Elder Of Ice Valley) when she was 'coincidentally' passing by. This novel would have been perfect if not for this CCCRP. Anyway its only an opinion from my perspective so if you have no problem with this CCCRP then give this a try
yo I just saw that you finally posted this story, can't wait to see more for this. Hope that the quality of the story is the same as the other one.
A naive innocent boy is trying to be a villain? it's funny how he want the good of both worlds but what will happen by putting legs in two boats? I can understand that it's still early but Author should try showing some bloodshed by him in the upcoming chapters as the work seems to be part of wpc 320 villain theme.