Just pick it so I can continue reading this!
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Your writing style is confusing. I dont understand why you dont use quotation marks. It makes it kind of difficult to read. It’s like the characters are speaking to eachother through their thoughts.
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Pretty good book. A guy gets a cheat in a game that allows him to chat with monsters, a unique idea amongst all the other generic cultivation books on Webnovel. But unlike other novels of the same genre where the npc’s seem like real people and don’t know that they are in a game, the npc’s in this novel are aware of things like stats, exp, levels, and the system.
This story is a true work of art. The plot is very unique and different to the things I've read in the past. Anything can happen, so the readers are always at the edge of their seats. Great work Author!
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I was pretty shaken up by that first chapter, which was pretty ruthless and brutal but it introduced the story's personality, which was bloody and not for the weak-minded. I like that there's good writing quality and character design. The detail and hook really brought me in and were quite amazing! The potential I see in this novel is high and I can foresee that it will be a fantastic, one-of-a-kind story.
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This novel belongs in the Game novel tag, not eastern fantasy. If you want to read an author who is creatively bankrupt and can’t come up with anything original this is the book for you.Suffers from the: lets take every ability, enemy, etc. from existing works so I don’t have to write anything myself barely.MINOR SPOILER:Also instantly we are met with cliches: unreasonabely powerful when in danger and showing more powerful thing he can choose but he chooses inferior one.Don’t get me started on also straight up copying skill descriptions and character apperances.